Hi Jamie! First post for me, here at awesomedude.
I found your story via Jamessavic's blog at gayauthors.org. I didn't kow this site before.
Being a big scify-freak I greatly enjoy your story and want to drop a few lines to thank you for this ongoing pice of work and your effort to add a new chapter every weekend.
Also a thank to AJ, the man in the back.
I belive he's also editing Dio's stories, which I also really like.
A few word's about the french terms in the story:
Were there any? If so, then I was oblivious to it. :roll:
Being german myself I encountered a few terms (mostly the names of places) that could be corrupted german. But it's also possible, that I misinterpreted it. Languages of countries that border one another tend to adopt terms of the other language and, in that process, become partly mixed. After all language is a living thing.
So I probably use corrupted phrases and expressions from dutch, french, etc., without being aware of it.
An idea I got is, that a map of your world would be great. But I also have the hunch, that it would be quite obvious if such a map is (only) a edited version of a real map.
That's all for now. Again my appreciation for your story.
Daniel