Rose Strailo

*falls to floor and laughs hysterically* *gets up* *wipes tear from eyes* *brushes off clothes* Okay, now that's done...*fixes shirt* He does need someone who is willing to wrestle this out of his hands now. He's good alone. He'll be better with a good beta and editor. I would do it, but I don't have many people on my resume right now. That and I'm still slightly hungover from the fight...

*snickers* Hey. It's nice to see so many people actually saying hi to me. I think I've gotten more hellos here then in GA...shocking.

It would have been nice to know that you were pimping my stories here to. But I forgive you. *hugs tightly*

That is to cute! *snickers* Very nice pic.

Thank you very much. ^_^ It's an earlier poem, but it's still one of my best poems out there. I'm rather happy with it.

It's kinda sad, but then again, when I wrote this, I was rather depressed. I hope that it's alright to post this here. A single drop, Slipping and sliding down her face. A look of sadness in her eyes, In her expression. Watching the world, As it slowly dies. People fighting each other. Fighting for something so meaningless That it would bring tears to an Angel. Tears start to gather, As the Angel continues to stare. Her heart slowly breaking, As the world continues to be destroyed. Tears of an Angel, Are the rarest kind. But we have been able to make the Angels cry out in pain, As we slowly, but surely, Destroy ourselves and the world.

It's true, I'm posting on GA's story site eFiction right now. I just joined yesterday so I haven't had time to start to post here. I hope you enjoy them. ^_^

No insult, but I like my flip flops. Thank you though. And thank you for the welcome. ^_^ It's nice to be welcomed by so many. Nice rabbit roar. Thank you for welcoming me. *snickers* Yes, a female. A feamle who is about to say screw the dating scene and become a nun...sorry, bad thoughts. Anyways, thank you for welcoming me in your own way. Thanks dear. It's nice to see you hear to. And you could have warned me about the fact that you put up a notice here about my flash stories to. *pouts at BK* I already do. It's a nice site and I find what I've read so far very interesting. I'm going to enjoy wondering around this site.

I promise I'll look after my shoes, or at least my flip flops. And theres a goat running around? Really? Wow...I seem to be running into goats all over the place. Thanks for welcoming me. It's nice to be here, so far. It's a mad house here? I didn't notice... Anyways, thank you for welcoming me. *watches the cookie* Cookie? *pounces the cookie*

I suppose I confused you huh? To be quite honest, I confused myself with that post. Sorry. Okay, let's see if I can't get this right now, shall we? When I talk transitional, I mean the parts that lead up to the parts of the story that ends with the climax. To be precise, the parts that you read that tells the reader what is around them, the time, the area around the character, ect. It's clinical. It reads like a monotone to me. I'm not sure about the others, but I have this habit of wanting to see emotion. I suppose I should explain what emotion means to me when it comes to a story. Emotion to me is the detail work and the way it's written. I've read many, many, many stories, thousands in fact, but only really read a few great stories in my life time. The difference between the great stories and the good stories, is the way the writer describes something. Let's see. Take this part: I can see it, but I can't feel it, like I can feel the rest of the story. This is a transitional scene. You are taking your character from one part to another. Add a bit more meat otherwise it sounds like the character is bored and not scared that something might just jump out and rip his head off. It's like it's a skeleton or something I would write out in an outline. The entire paragraph leaves me with questions like 'How dark or dim is it?', 'What does the chair look like?', 'Are there tables or trash on the floor?', ect. I'm not saying overload it with details, just add a bit more detail. Just my thoughts. I hope that you really don't feel insulted or anything. I don't want to insult you or make you mad.

My spam folders get a work out, on all three of my e-mail accounts. Though, I do have to say, I miss those offers to increse my bust size. *snickers*

I rather like it to. It's an interesting concept and it does make you want to read more, as long as you have the stomach for it.l I did feel like it was more clinical then anything. It did make me want a bit more detail with teh transitional parts, but it's still very good and has some great potential. That's my thoughts though. Good luck with your writing. Rose

I suppose I should have warned you that when given a suggestion about a site, I look and if I like, I join? Thanks anyways, sweet thing. Thanks. ^_^ It's nice to be here. Now, let's see what I can contribute to, shall we?

*stumbles into area* *reads* Oh boy. I didn't even know that BK put this here! Well, to all those who read, thank you. *Holds up glass with smile*

Thank you. ^_^ It's nice to be here. I've seen that I do know others here and it's nice to see familiar faces (or as much as a familiar name). *bounces off to pounce her friends*

Okay, so I'm new to this forum, so if I'm wrong on where to put this, then tell me. (Tiger made me do it) Anyways, I'm happy to be here and hope that I can contribute as much as possible. I'm silly and rather goofy and my thought process may make several people tilt there head to the side and go "Huh?" but all around, I'm a nice girl with a strong personality... That's all I suppose... Rose