Passive

Whatever happened to this story? I thought it was really good and going somewhere...then it just stops? lol...oh well...maybe i'm just greedy... hope it comes back though!

for those people...just make a list like.. 1. 2. 3. 4....... then when you need the hyperlink in the story..just put "1." then they can go to the list and read it.......lol i'm retarded..lol

I think it has a great story line.. The hyper link idea is really cool..cuz you don't have to read them to follow the story....but it's nice to know the other character's pov without having to decrypt the story..lol.. anyways..kick ass job dude! keep up the good work!