Passive

What are you talkin about? I was being serious, i can rarely understand poems - but i could actually follow his.

Wow, that was awesome, i could actually follow it. :)

ah...ya! i gotcha now..lol..i'm a little slow.. Maybe it'd be better to change the pov now..lol or switch between the 2

Great come back chapter :D i'm glad you didn't change the chatacter pov.. i think that might take a little away from the story..

Maybe Benee?

You could always change your name..lol I am going to, i hate mine...once i'm old enough , that is..lol

Another great chapter :) I can't wait to see where Dan and Greg go..:D And dracula can't get AIDs...cuz you can't cross dieseases...so a vampire couldn't get human AIDs.

Thanks. I also think i figured out why they are so messed up. I write them at school..lol. um, so lemme get this straight, you hate 'y's...but you have a y in your name?lol

What the shit? lol.. You all have gone insayne? lol..;) D & D Death and destruction It's all that i see This war that's going on Inside of me Looking to the sky to cure my pain Looking to the ground for a place to live in vain

Oh my fucking god! Codey!

lol you're crazy! theory of life is You work hard your whole life, and have no time to enjoy it.

Thanks guys, I just...got a lot of crap that i'm tryin to get through.. and it's tough when i can't be myself, which you guys probably know all about... ps. I watch Lots of tv..lol.. ER,The OC, 24, and some other ones..lol.

Sorry, Blue, If i came off as an asshole..and i didn't know i flamed anyone, so..anyways..sorry for that too.:( I get whatcha guys are sayin though, but yall'n's are older than me..and have had the experience?.eh....and i don't really like thinking..lol...arg.. I'm sorry, i'm a fucking idiot.

I just don't like lying to people...and i have to do it every fuckin day..and it sucks and i hate my family, lol, and almost everyone else around me... ..but i usually try and hold my emotions in....then let them all explode at once... and i have no future..

hmm..i suppose.. i dunno what this is. You see today But you don't see tomorrow Drowning in Your own sea of sorrow arg..i got a few more..but they are hard to read..lol It seems to me The world today Is a world away Laws and governing are Long and humbling We can't hold you to it But you sure can do it I hope you fucking die You will fucking fry All because you lie Goodbye Goodbye I hope you Die Die Die The fecal matter all over your face You look like a big wet pile of waste Can you not give me my space? You big fucking pile of waste eh...can't read 1 word from this other one..lol. There is no doubt in my head That you are dead But i keep making your bed So you can rest your head I watched you get shot I held you while you died I can't stand life without you I keep thinking about you They say you died painlessy They lied I heard you Cough Bed Choke And cry out in pain .......and the last 2 lines are crossed out for some reason..lol don't worry people! i am on medication and will probably be going to a counciler...lol anyways, thanks for taking the time to read my shitty poems (if you can even call them that)

Thanks.. And, when i look in the mirror i see myself, lol But..i guess emotional-wise? or somethin...that is what i see.

You can't see me But I see you Anger Hate Pain Are all that I see I'm looking in the mirror eh?..lol..i suck

Awesome!!

Loved the latest chapter :) ....don't know what else to say..lol

Wow! I love it already! :) Good Job, keep up the good work :)

I think you should keep doin it, it's really nice to know what other people are thinking.

I read Hero in the Hallways...i really liked it, so when i read your post...i thought Mr. Black Sings A sad song was part 2..cuz i read it too fast...lol....but..they are both kick ass!! good job keep up the good work :D

:( So fucked up...:(

I loved it. It took me like 4 hours to read it, lol.. and i messed my eyes up, but it was worth it....i just wish there was more...

wow! kick ass job on the new chapters. oh...and thanks for the fucking cliff-hanger!! lol..