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  1. Isn't that how it almost always works?

    C

    The one notable exception that comes to mind is the classic MGM filmed version of "The Wizard of Oz," which turned L. Frank Baum's political screed about the gold standard into a truly entertaining and coherent story with memorable characters and scenes. For example, a comparison of the film's scene where the Scarecrow, Tin Woodman, and Cowardly Lion receive their promised rewards with the book's version of that scene shows just how imaginative and creative the screenwriters were.

    R

  2. Just thought I'd follow up with a couple of screen shots illustrating the problems with styled post text on the mobile platform. The first shows what happens with light blue text color. The second (dude) shows what happens when Comic Sans is selected as the font -- it gets converted to a nearly illegible script font.

    I'm hoping there's a setting in the forum software to disable font styling only in the mobile version of the site, so that the text will come out looking normal and be readable.

    Note that for whatever reason these screen shots are reproducing at more than double the size that they appear on the actual iPhone where they were shot. Take that into account when evaluating readability. It really is difficult. And I didn't bother to show one instance where a poster selected white as the text color -- that post is completely invisible with white text against the white background that the mobile version uses.

    Light blue type color:

    IMG_0214_zpse40cf75b.png

    Comic Sans type font:

    IMG_0213_zpsc73bf05c.png

    R

  3. Thanks to both Nick and Pedro for responding. If I follow what seems like the subtext here it throws an entirely different light on things from what I had originally thought. A bit like someone saying "here are my details in Québec -- or should I say Canada," given the political currents of recent decades.

    R

  4. But how does this apply to the remark in the story? In other words, why was it "or should I say British?" when the address was not in Wales or Scotland? It seems like there must be a political or cultural thing going on as to which I'm clueless.

    (Of course the list of things as to which I'm clueless is large and ever growing.)

    R

  5. OK.

    Spoiler alert. Don't click on "Show" unless you don't care.

    Let's just say that if I was Tony I would be really pissed at my parents. Where are they? Did they get abducted by aliens? Maybe they're busy looking after his brothers and sisters. Oh wait, he doesn't have any brothers and sisters. He is their only child. He has just started high school. He has joined the freshman football team after an incredible amount of hanky-twisting about whether he will be turned into a vegetable due to brain damage when he starts playing. And Friday is his first game. Not only did he survive, but he played very well and was written up in the local newspaper's sports section.

    So, OK, his dad can't figure out any way whatsoever to schedule his training of a successor to allow him to attend the game. And his mom, who earlier in the story is normally at home in the afternoon to greet him when he comes home from school, can't get away this Friday to see her son play. (I seem dimly to remember a comment that she was going to take some time off right then because of the visit of Uncle Phil and Aunt Betty from San Diego. I wouldn't swear to this.)

    Regrettably, it seems, all telephone service in the local area must have catastrophically failed, because neither parent can even take a moment to call Tony and find out how he did in his game. Not on Friday. Not the entire day Saturday. Indeed, there is no call until Sunday afternoon, and then the subject is them dragging him off to Davis to look at a house. Still no mention of his football game.

    Uncle Phil -- who is apparently staying at Tony's house -- brought his video equipment with him to record Tony's game. He shows the video footage on Saturday. Where are Tony's parents? They're still working at their local jobs (dad at the community college, mom at the local hospital). Did they suddenly move out of their house? Have they already taken up residence in Davis, requiring each one to make a very long commute each day? That would be crazy.

    So where are they?

    Are they pissed off at Tony for his bad reaction to the sudden announcement of a move? That certainly would be totally inconsistent with their acknowledgment to him that they had mishandled the issue, and wanted to make it up to him. Or are they too guilty to even talk to him? That doesn't seem plausible, because they have no hesitation to grab him on Sunday for a trip to Davis.

    So where did they disappear to? How come they suddenly have tuned themselves out of Tony's life? Keep in mind that this entire story is a flashback from the first few paragraphs of chapter 1, where Tony is found by him mom crying in his bedroom three months after the beginning of the school year. Since roughly two weeks have elapsed in the story since the beginning of the school year (if my sense of the story time is correct), that means his mom is still around 2-1/2 months after the start of the school year to find him crying in his bedroom. And unless something truly major has happened in the interim, Tony is still at Wilson High School three months into the semester, staying with Aunt Nora and Uncle Dennis per the agreement worked out when the move to Davis was announced. Or did that whole arrangement fall apart by the three-month mark?

    Inquiring minds want to know.

    R

  6. I read the whole series (as far as I know) elsewhere and really enjoyed it. I happen to live very close to an area with a lot of horses and riding, although I've never taken advantage of it myself. It's very cool to read about horses and horsemanship.

    My only regret is that I wish Andrew would resume working on his unfinished story "The Chosen."

    R

  7. Really exceptional story.

    Last year I listened to an extended series of college lectures about World War I, and with those details of the horrors of that war in mind, this story was especially poignant. To have any kind of story with a hopeful ending would have seemed impossible to me until I read this one.

    Good show.

    R

  8. It is a delightful story. I speak French fluently, and there are definitely some issues in the French in the story. Some of them come from transliteration errors inevitable with software translation programs, where the translated meaning is incorrect in the circumstances. Another issue, and the main one for me, is that no teenager would use the formal "vous" form of address with another teenager, especially one they want to become friends with. They would use the informal "tu" form. And there are other areas where idiomatic French would differ and not have a direct English counterpart.

    But it doesn't detract from the story, even with the realization that it is improbable that a French teenager in Paris wouldn't know some English since English is routinely taught in high school and kids pick up on a lot of American culture (movies, music, and TV), along with the improbability that an American kid spending months in Paris each summer would not have picked up many bits and pieces of French despite himself. The premise works within the reality of the story.

    Should anyone ever desire to include French within one of their stories, I would be happy to offer consulting services on how to say things appropriately.

    R

  9. I have a young acquaintance back east who has worked for several years at a Hollister store, and it always sounded pretty brutal, even during non-holiday times. The only spiff was that he got a good deal on all their clothing, because they wanted all employees to wear that brand on the job. But there were often late nights when they had to reset the whole store after closing to be ready with new displays and merchandise the next morning (I think he called this "impact").

    Anyway, I thought of him while reading about Gavin's adventures.

    One question: Did Gavin wuss out on the plan he had with his supervisor?

    R

  10. I have three Bosch 18-volt cordless units that I use regularly and work very well: A regular cordless drill, a cordless hammer-drill, and a cordless impact wrench. I confess that tools (of all kinds) and stuff to go with playing the bass guitar are my two biggest weaknesses.

    Oh, and I have two chain saws -- a small one and a regular-size one. Both are electric because I hate keeping two-cycle engines running properly.

    R

  11. I don't get why the article doesn't say what was done to the perpetrators. I hope the army didn't brush it under the rug.

    C

    I think the reason is that the information was a statistic contained in some document disclosed under the British equivalent of the Freedom of Information Act. The document itself didn't mention broom handles as I read the article -- all of that was filled in by the reporter and others. The question will be whether this article stirs up enough of a furor to lead to some further official inquiry.

    I can't help thinking of Tom Cruise and Jack Nicholson in "A Few Good Men."

    R

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