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Rutabaga

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  1. Hmm... when I loaded Grant's author's page using IE10 it was there, with a "new" icon next to it. There have been some recent problems with GoDaddy so I deleted a yet-to-be posted story from his author's page and re-upped it; it's still there for me. Try it now and let me know.

    Colin :icon_geek:

    I reloaded the already-open Grant Bentley page (the one linked above) and now this story appears with the "new" icon. It definitely was not there before when I made my last post. Good to have it available for others to see.

    R

  2. Just ran across this story again in random wanderings. Really nice development of the two sides of the coins, so to speak. Actually I was quite impressed with Sam's perceptiveness in figuring out what was going on with Tope so rapidly. I assume in all his reading he must have encountered something about this, or maybe there was someone he knew in the past that had the problem, or -- who knows?

    I was also a bit curious to know if Tope had had the same speech issues all his life, or if maybe something had happened to trigger the problem.

    All in all, an uplifting story that really made my morning.

    R

  3. I empathize with Tony because I got yanked out of my high school at the beginning of 11th grade to spend a year at a different high school on the other side of the country, and then yanked back at the beginning of 12th grade to return to my earlier school. It was weird because during 11th grade I knew I would be going back, and so couldn't really put down roots there, but when I got back to my original school in 12th grade the world had kind of passed me by and I felt somewhat like an outsider.

    Many years later my mother read a comment I had made about this, and she apologized for the wrenching transitions.

    I actually thought about doing something like Tony is planning in order to stay in my original stomping ground, but it was not to be.

    R

  4. "He talked a long time. Even said some things I needed to know."

    Seems like we readers can see where this is going earlier than the narrator.

    More than that I cannot say without risking spoilers. I will say, though, that I was surprised at how neutral and emotionless Colt apparently was when he received certain news in this chapter.

    R

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