Richard Norway Posted August 9, 2008 Report Share Posted August 9, 2008 Am I whole? I see the grass, the trees. Am I whole? I see family and friends. Am I whole? I see anguish and doubts. Am I whole? I see a future filled with passion and greatness. Am I whole? I see life. Am I whole? I see you. Am I whole? Yes! Link to comment
colinian Posted August 11, 2008 Report Share Posted August 11, 2008 Very nice, Richard. I love poems that have a happy ending. And my play on words is correct, too: this is a love poem. Colin Link to comment
Jason Rimbaud Posted August 25, 2008 Report Share Posted August 25, 2008 This comes under the heading of short and sweet. Questions, doubts, fears, seem to fade when eyes fall on the one that truly does complete them. Jason Link to comment
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