dcorvus Posted March 20, 2005 Report Share Posted March 20, 2005 This was an excellent short story. :) Graeme, I bow to you: you've mastered the art of short-storying writing. Though it was short, you managed to flesh out all the characters with an economy of words, and the final twist was like a maraschino cherry on top of it all. Excellent! dcorvus Quote Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted March 20, 2005 Report Share Posted March 20, 2005 Ack! I've been Ambushed by Graeme once again. Quote Link to comment
RPnSoCal Posted March 24, 2005 Report Share Posted March 24, 2005 Agreed ! Another fine story Graeme! I'll admit I didn't think it was a bashing story - just cause you're a bit too sneaky :D - but I didn't expect the brother to be gay. Quote Link to comment
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