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trying one without my editors help :-)

Random thoughts

on a never ending carousel

Stopping occasionally

to add excitement,bewilderment,confusion

To grasp ahold of one

needing a grip so tight

Trying to make sense

find a place where it belongs

Mostly imaginary

dreams we wish will come true

For true happiness and love

seeking the courage to be

Being just me

The carousel keeps turning

always bringing a new day

As long as it keeps going

theres hope for better days

DJ :-)

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Guest rusticmonk86

awesome. I like it. :)

erm . . . fourth paragraph (stanza?[it's late])

" Trying to make since

find a place where it belongs "

Should "since" be "sense"? Or was that a play-of-homonym?

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