DJ Posted May 31, 2005 Report Share Posted May 31, 2005 Carousel trying one without my editors help :-) Random thoughts on a never ending carousel Stopping occasionally to add excitement,bewilderment,confusion To grasp ahold of one needing a grip so tight Trying to make sense find a place where it belongs Mostly imaginary dreams we wish will come true For true happiness and love seeking the courage to be Being just me The carousel keeps turning always bringing a new day As long as it keeps going theres hope for better days DJ :-) Quote Link to comment
Guest rusticmonk86 Posted May 31, 2005 Report Share Posted May 31, 2005 awesome. I like it. :) erm . . . fourth paragraph (stanza?[it's late]) " Trying to make since find a place where it belongs " Should "since" be "sense"? Or was that a play-of-homonym? Quote Link to comment
DJ Posted May 31, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 31, 2005 only one spelling mistake ,lol thanks for letting me know,i fixed it :oops: Quote Link to comment
Guest rusticmonk86 Posted June 1, 2005 Report Share Posted June 1, 2005 no worries. it looks better now. :D Quote Link to comment
