bi_janus Posted February 22, 2012 Report Share Posted February 22, 2012 Return of the Gardener Bi Janus The mild surprise, unconcealable, almost out the door between the legs, a sly pup pulled back by its tail, shame-faces put right with smiles. No card to pass around this time. You’re looking better, not so drawn, a succulent suffused— epidemiologists ask, steroidal edema masking wasting? The pruning’s long done. Now, the poison for the nematodes mixed and spread. The little buggers, cut in half, become two each. In the present case eradication is the homicidal cure, and a flowery shrub reprieve is what you take, a tenuous balance among things, proper and not, growing in the soil. The bed’s put right as rain one more time. Back to anthrax, pertussis and E. coli, influenza churning through unremarked, disaster an intellectual puzzle. Marshal some strength, planting season approaches. Link to comment
Camy Posted February 23, 2012 Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 Umm. What I can say is that this poem, and nearly all of your poems, gently fry my brain. Lucky I am there's Wikipedia, otherwise I'd need a bookshelf full of reference material. Is it real gardening or an allegory of something darker? Do I care? Possibly, and it frustrates. That last night I dreamt of gardening is worrying, too. Link to comment
bi_janus Posted February 23, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 23, 2012 Well, I'm back at work this week. My co-workers are always mildly surprised when I show up after a bout. There's the moment of surprise quickly replaced by solicitude. As to gardening, I think it a fair metaphor for many experiences with cancer therapy. Now, I am shame-faced at I driving you to Wikipedia and garden dreams. Better I should drive you to your garden. Link to comment
colinian Posted February 24, 2012 Report Share Posted February 24, 2012 It's a very powerful statement, bi_janus. I'm constantly amazed at the power and meaning in your poems. You have a story on Nifty that some here might not know about. It's Rebound, and I am totally hooked. It's here. Colin ;icon_geek: Link to comment
bi_janus Posted February 25, 2012 Author Report Share Posted February 25, 2012 Thank you, Colin. Link to comment
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