Mikey and the Chicadee

[vwl]

A fresh beginning to what so far is a well-done story. Some nice writing.

http://www.nifty.org//nifty/gay/beginnings/mikey-and-the-chickadee/

[vwl]

Chapter 4 has been posted: http://www.nifty.org//nifty/gay/beginnings/mikey-and-the-chickadee/mikey-and-the-chickadee-4

Remember to give the author encouragement.

[vwl]

The story is up to Chapter 7. I like the characters.

http://www.nifty.org//nifty/gay/beginnings/mikey-and-the-chickadee/mikey-and-the-chickadee-7

Remember to give the author encouragement.

[Cole Parker]

OK, I read the first chapter. Seems pretty well-written.

C

[vwl]

I've just gotten around to the latest chapter. Still good, still well written with enjoyable characters.

http://www.nifty.org//nifty/gay/beginnings/mikey-and-the-chickadee/mikey-and-the-chickadee-8

[vwl]

The past few days have given me time to get up to date with this excellent story, Mikey and the Chickadee, now at Chapter 12:

http://www.nifty.org//nifty/gay/beginnings/mikey-and-the-chickadee/mikey-and-the-chickadee-12

Good, interesting characters.

[vwl]

Another chapter is up: http://www.nifty.org//nifty/gay/beginnings/mikey-and-the-chickadee/mikey-and-the-chickadee-13

[larkin]

You're are right. The author has an easy and intelligent writing style. An accountant and a software coder meeting in some anonymous city. They are commuters and it is one of those chance meetings that can sometimes result in love.

This bears little resemblance to my own ignominious and clandestine encounters but the fact that this story continues to hold my interest says a lot.

Only to part 5 so I'll reserve further comment.

[Cole Parker]

I'm enjoying it, too. Very interesting use of the language.

C

[vwl]

With the author joining AD and the story completed, this topic has been moved from First Alert to Readers Rule.

A nicely done story either place. http://www.awesomedude.com/kid-boise/mikey-and-the-chickadee/index.htm

[kidboise]

Hi all, I know I've been pretty quiet on the forum. Working on a second story which I hope to begin posting here in the next month or two. Just wanted to let you all know that Mikey and the Chickadee is now available in print on Amazon. Here is the link:

http://www.amazon.com/dp/0692629769/

If any of you read and enjoyed the story, the print version is very similar, and I would so appreciate it if you took the time to write me a quick review on Amazon. Also, if any of you have an account at Goodreads, feel free to add me as a friend over there (Kid Boise), rate the book, etc. Hope you all are well!