Thirdeye
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'you bought a guitar to punish your ma'
Hahahahaha...
Love it.
TR
Can't take credit, Its actually Pink Floyd from "Welcome to the Machine" off of the Album Wish you where here. I just couldn't fit it in :D
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Read Broken, I highly recommend it
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For away one who has not read Broken yet or is not at Chapter 15 yet, I would read that and then re-read this and it makes it all the more powerful. Jim you really have got a way with words
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Damn Codey that was great! As already said really an eye opener
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Wow. Powerful stuff Jim. Don't really know what else to say
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*cough* old people *cough*
lol..
forgot...i seen Rush with my parents...a year or so ago..
Damn kids!
Show some respect! What, did you think you invented staying up wasted all night!?
You should have been here for the seventies. Cyber-sex my ass...
:-D
I've heard about your superbowl parties.......I bow to the master :smt033 :-D
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damn
*cough* old people *cough*
lol..
forgot...i seen Rush with my parents...a year or so ago..
LMAO!!! Atleast no one has said Billy Ray sirus or Garth Brooks......yet anyway
Have you pick up Francis the Mute yet?
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In light of this new albatross
The mall will be closed today
The parasites are shaken by this
To that we extend condolences
But our culture is falling away
The vultures fly in chaos
Looking for a carcass to strip
The savagery is always on tap
Left with this milky water turned gray
The pushing an shoving is quite severe
as regal masses pick away the kill
The noises they make are so trite
This is the game they love to play
Always a whore for yuppie designs
Baseless clover in these shallow times
It?s the frenzy for greed that truly delights
The vultures receive all which they pray
Turning a sparrow into cast
The method call of the gathering feast
Waiting for a deadpan delay
Which of us will be a heathen today
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We are a perfect concert
I can?t say what you can?t hear
We are thoughtless perfection
As this travesty continues to blow near
How long until the day breaks
And these cryptic halogens become clear
How much longer can we lean for cover
While being dressed with this vulgar fear
As I lap into the company of cowardice
At the place beside me you stand my peer
With these hollow makeshift lies
Continue to turtle and let discouraged steer
Sucked into the vacuum of this repeatable cycle
Never the hunter but always the deer
These words spin around your ears
The meaning forced yet you don?t hear
Were stuck long in transit you and me
Never the hunter but always the deer
We?ll paint on our clown faces
Move as if we really here
But the echoing of this will bring us cold
As the usage of this entity will smear
The hollow echo rings as bells
Never the hunter but always the deer
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How?s it possible to forget how to cry
Have I fallen so much
That my emotions have run dry
Is it hatred towards you for letting me fall
Or the feeble fact you won?t let me fly
All I ever needed was a reason to stand
Yet that?s been forsaken for the hot desert sand
But here I walk again with my limbs burning dry
I?ll continue to push ahead alone
Until once again I?m griped by this tide
Someday I?ll find everything I need
One day I?ll know what it is to feel pride
But really What does it all mean to me
If by then I?m already broken inside
As the fearful moon shines down
Like a label of the cowards who continue to pry
I beg and plead for mercy
And receive thirty pieces of silver
Yet this is the just and forgiven eye
I recoil, shake and quiver
Ask again for what will be Undelivered
Worthlessness is truly your prize
And I swear to wear it well
Hanging there on each fruitless thought
While the bags above my eyes swell
Its one feeling left after my body?s holocaust
When was it I became a submissive shell
Let the rovers run me down
And I?d be sure to extend my hand
This my patrons is the true hell
Forgot the brimstone and fiery ash
Your soul burning in your body
Is a torment you can?t lash
Torture is knowing your hope is a dream
Everything you wanted is something you can?t catch
The hate inside has prospered for a decade
Tell me what?s the cost to oneself to scratch this rash
The mirror of despair is not easily matched
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That's better writing than half the commercial groups are putting out 3rd eye.
Had a upsetting night needed to vent. Thanks!
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Hello :)
That subject ought to have riled you all up a bit. It's true, you know, I hate most gay stories. I'm sure, coming from me, that's quite a shock.
Let me explain. I love a good story (novel, novella, short story, essay, whatever). However, many people write these specifically gay pieces and most of them, quite frankly, aren't very good -- more later.
However, good writers write a fantastic story and one or more of the characters happen to be gay. That's not the same thing. And I'm not arguing semantics. In a good story, it should work pretty well regardless of the genders of the characters.
Stories where the whole plot exists SOLELY because the character is gay are generally weak.
(I am not referring to 'sex' stories where the point is sex. If you're not sure, remove all the sex scenes. If there's no story left, you've written a sex story. Call Harlequin and understand that what you have isn't literature.)
Most of the authors here are good authors and write good stories that happen to have gay characters. Sure, some elements won't work -- like getting your ass kicked in school because you're straight.
And there are exceptions "New Brother" is a fine work and if the character wasn't gay the story just wouldn't exist. No rule is absolute.
Anyway, I wanted to vent after getting hosed, yet again, on Nifty. But I keep going back because sometimes you find a piece like "tapping" which is well worth sifting through the hellish morass of crap that lives at Nifty.
-- wbms
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http://crvboy.com/stories/index.html
I haye Nifty also, because most of the time any good stories end up not getting finished or end up getting finished on better site like Dudes, Dewy and a few others
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Everything I seek
I?ve found was already given away
Been second all my life
Why would that change today
If I were to blend with this crimson
Less then a handful who would pray
I?ve been walking the wire for a while now
As I sit in this blackened room
I wonder when It was I finally fell
There?s a hole on my soul
And it grows deeper
I?m slowly dying here
As this pain grows steeper
Hidden behind my eyes
As I try to compensate for this disease
Is a pain that lies beneath the heart
But I do just what?s needed to please
Even as loneliness tears me apart
I?d find away home to escape this place
But there?s no one waiting for me
This sound is more then I can taste
Why can?t your cancer be for me
There?s a hole on my soul
And it grows deeper
I?m slowly dying here
As this pain grows steeper
It?s killing me
And they can?t even see
It?s killed me
Yet, even in death I'm not free
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APC, ICP, Fuel, American HiFi.
My brothers been to a ton of sevendust concertm he saw them and El Nino last year twice. Lucky bastard has time to go to a ton of concerts, as a matter of fact hes going to see Slipknot tonight in Philly.
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Atleast your not going to jail.
from aintitcoolnews.com
This is terribly uncool. Kid arrested as a terrorist for writing a fictional zombie story...
Ahoy, squirts! Quint here. I'm sorry, this isn't movie news or anything even close to being cool. This might stray a bit into some angry political debates below, but I find it hard to believe even the most radical of conservatives can honestly look at a piece of fiction written by a kid, a school assignment no less, and say that warrants him being arrested for terrorist threats. Really, where is the line going to be drawn? His story was about zombies overtaking a school and that was construed as a serious threat made against the school, ignoring the fact that no one in the story is a real person and the school is different. This guy's soon to go on trial for a felony offense and it makes me sick, personally. What's next? Stephen King better watch out because he's murdered thousands of fake people and, like King did in THE STAND, Tom Clancy has set off fake nukes on fake American soil... if that's not a terrorist threat, I don't know what is.
Am I the only one ****ed off by this? If you agree that this is just and right, please let me know what I'm overlooking in the talkback below. To me this is so amazingly unAmerican... I can't believe something like this is happening in my country. Here's the full story:
Hey Harry, this isn't cool...it's kind of the antithesis of cool. But it's the kind of thing that a lot of people need to know about. We're crossing the line and now I think our freedom is really at stake.
CLARK COUNTY
Student Arrested For Terroristic Threatening Says Incident A Misunderstanding
A George Rogers Clark High School junior arrested Tuesday for making terrorist threats told LEX 18 News Thursday that the "writings" that got him arrested are being taken out of context.
Winchester police say William Poole, 18, was taken into custody Tuesday morning. Investigators say they discovered materials at Poole's home that outline possible acts of violence aimed at students, teachers, and police.
Poole told LEX 18 that the whole incident is a big misunderstanding. He claims that what his grandparents found in his journal and turned into police was a short story he wrote for English class.
"My story is based on fiction," said Poole, who faces a second-degree felony terrorist threatening charge. "It's a fake story. I made it up. I've been working on one of my short stories, (and) the short story they found was about zombies. Yes, it did say a high school. It was about a high school over ran by zombies."
Even so, police say the nature of the story makes it a felony. "Anytime you make any threat or possess matter involving a school or function it's a felony in the state of Kentucky," said Winchester Police detective Steven Caudill.
Poole disputes that he was threatening anyone.
"It didn't mention nobody who lives in Clark County, didn't mention (George Rogers Clark High School), didn't mention no principal or cops, nothing,"
said Poole. "Half the people at high school know me. They know I'm not that stupid, that crazy."
On Thursday, a judge raised Poole's bond from one to five thousand dollars after prosecutors requested it, citing the seriousness of the charge.
Poole is being held at the Clark County Detention Center.
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I thought it was very good and was a very good fit with the rest of the stories.
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I would also like to say it was all Thirdeye's fault!! I got the idea after reading his Church Bulletins post.
I'm sorry and take full reasonability, and I swear I won't use the school computers.
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Wow. School justice is hardly ever reasonable
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Found this on another message board, thought it was funny
Church Bulletins
1. "Scouts are saving aluminum cans, bottles, and other items to be recycled. Proceeds will be used to cripple children."
2. "Ushers will eat latecomers."
3. "The Ladies Bible Study will be held Thursday morning at 10. All ladies are invited to lunch in the Fellowship Hall after the B.S. is done."
4. "The Pastor would appreciate it if the ladies of the congregation would lend him their electric girdles for the pancake breakfast next Sunday morning."
5. "The audience is asked to remain seated until the end of the recession."
6. "Low Self-Esteem Support Group will meet Thursday at 7 to 8:30 PM. Please use the back door."
7. "Pastor is on vacation. Massages can be given to church secretary."
8. "The third verse of Blessed Assurance will be sung without musical accomplishment."
9. "The Rev. Merriwether spoke briefly, much to the delight of the audience."
10. "The pastor will preach his farewell message, after which the choir will sing, 'Break Forth Into Joy.'"
11. "Next Sunday Mrs. Vinson will be soloist for the morning service. The pastor will then speak on 'It's a Terrible Experience'."
12. "Due to the Rector's illness, Wednesday's healing services will be discontinued until further notice."
13. "Weight Watchers will meet at 7 PM. Please use large double door at the side entrance."
14. "Remember in prayer the many who are sick of our church and community."
15. "The eighth graders will be presenting Shakespeare's Hamlet in the church basement on Friday at 7 PM. The congregation is invited to attend this tragedy."
16. "A song fest was hell at the Methodist church Wednesday."
17. "Today's Sermon: 'How Much Can a Man Drink?' with hymns from a full choir."
18. On a church bulletin during the minister's illness: "God is good - Dr. Hargreaves is better."
19. "Potluck supper: prayer and medication to follow."
20. "The outreach committee has enlisted 25 visitors to make calls on people who are not afflicted with any church."
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Would you look at me now?
Can you tell I'm a man?
With these scars on my wrists
To prove I'll try again
Try to die again, try to live through this night
Try to die again.....
Suicide note is a great song
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I agree with everything said above. The story is great and very touching. I'm also sure that its hard to write at times for you James so I just want to say keep going because the work speaks for itself.
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I like it
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Another great chapter. I can't wait for Chapter nine to see how Greg reacts.
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Some stories I read for the plot, though I must say that a lot of plots are pretty similar. Gay boy thrown out of home by father who doesn't understand (always the father, mother is always sympathetic)... Seeks shelter with friend/relative... The genre has rules which are recombined in new inventive ways but are as predictable as an old Scottish ballad.
But this story--I read for the writing! When I came to Part 5 and halfway through it realized that it was from a different point of view, I backed up to the beginning of the Chapter, and re-read, but the re-reading renewed my commitment to following the tale. And now with Part 9--(how do I phrase this without introducing any spoilers?)--having it narrated from that point of view is brilliance!
Looking forward to further developments.
--Rigel
I was going to say the samething. In some stories the change in point of view can really hurt the flow, but in Angel it moves so smooth and really just adds to the plot.....I don't know if what I said makes sense so I'll agree that its very good.
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Random Junk
in Poets' Corner
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You?ve clearly become disinterested
In what I have got to say
I lay here grasping for a breath
Just to watch you turn away
When did things go so wrong
At what point did you change
I use to feel you?d care
If I stopped breathing
How could I be so wrong
You left us all here grieving
In your selfish quest
You forgot all about your charges
In your wake you left a mess
And only me behind to clean it
Didn?t matter I was in no shape to do so
But you wouldn?t understand this
You never once came to me
Just to ask if I was ok
The only time you looked at me
Was to complain about your life
Even when I hid away
Didn?t even know I was not in sight
Never cared how I felt
About the split in our home
you marched along in your war
ignorant to the damage made
Never knew how close I came
To falling off that razor blade
how you beseech us now
To return to your side
You tell us how your proud
To have made it out of hell
Was it really that bad
Everything was done
To accommodate your needs
As you marched along changed
Never heard pleas
So glad your happy now though
Wish you all the best