vwl Posted November 16, 2019 Report Share Posted November 16, 2019 Marin Giustinian has produced another, good short story. http://www.nifty.org/nifty/gay/beginnings/of-light-and-life If you like it, let the author know, and if you like my recommendations such as this story, let me know. Link to comment
Talo Segura Posted November 17, 2019 Report Share Posted November 17, 2019 I like that you made a recommendation, you could have said a bit more, but it's a short story. Did I like it? Not too much. I found it wishy-washy, not sure if that is the right term. A bit watery, superficial. The story looks at an adult teenage relationship without going into any depth. Sure, it's a short story, but entirely a dream, completely unrealistic, a veritable fairy story. It was was well written, but I've read a better story by the same author (can't remember the title), this story was very much in the niche where it belongs, on Nifty (several graphic scenes). Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted November 18, 2019 Report Share Posted November 18, 2019 Very decent story, obviously well-written, and the descriptions of the landscapes and sailing were very well done. Thanks for the notification, Linc. C Link to comment
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