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I like that you made a recommendation, you could have said a bit more, but it's a short story.

Did I like it? Not too much.

I found it wishy-washy, not sure if that is the right term. A bit watery, superficial. The story looks at an adult teenage relationship without going into any depth. Sure, it's a short story, but entirely a dream, completely unrealistic, a veritable fairy story. It was was well written, but I've read a better story by the same author (can't remember the title), this story was very much in the niche where it belongs, on Nifty (several graphic scenes).

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