Josiah Jacobus-Parker Posted December 11, 2005 Report Share Posted December 11, 2005 Bittersweet Victory We bet him five dollars That he would drown. The lake was green and dark As if the mountains were great organs Leaking bile into their valleys. The weeds were high Trailing their tendrils on the tepid surface We bet him five dollars That he would drown As the mosquito larvae festered In the shallows And the pond skimmers tracked across the surface Of the algae polluted water. We bet him five dollars That he would drown As he took a running start And dove beneath the surface And we laughed and cajoled And waited as the bubbles Trickled their way to the surface. We bet him five dollars That he would drown... A bittersweet victory. ----------------------------------------- Well that was morbid. Link to comment
blue Posted December 11, 2005 Report Share Posted December 11, 2005 :? :( Yes it was. Evocative use of words to give imagery, but...morbid. Yeesh. Link to comment
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