Camy Posted February 21, 2007 Report Share Posted February 21, 2007 Spontaneous 13 by Camy Spontaneous erections have caught me out before, but now I'm definitely in control, it won't happen any more. ‘He’ popped up at the doctors; who blushed, coughed, and wrote a note. He sprang to attention when I saw the guy, who stars in my favourite soap. ‘He’ didn’t pay attention, when I begged him to behave: I had to pretend it was all a joke, when I bussed a guy called Dave. The next month ‘he’ was harder; more than ‘he’ was soft. I remember the discomfort very well; ‘He’ was a bitch, though well aloft. Then a subtly creeping anguish, forced me to sit and think … it wasn’t girls that got ‘him’ excited, it was guys - some dressed in pink! It was guys ‘he’ liked, and no mistake: It was guys who floated ‘his’ boat. Girls did nothing; zilch, nada, zip - but guys let ‘him’ freely emote…. --- I was thinking about the thread 'Spontaneous erections' and I remembered a summer a long time ago, in a land far, far away - when I was 13. I'm almost entirely unconvinced about the punctuation - and it hasn't been near Kitty's wondrous red pen. Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted February 21, 2007 Report Share Posted February 21, 2007 I love 'his' detached 'world view' of what must have easily been, a very hard time to come by. A charming poem Camy! Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted February 21, 2007 Report Share Posted February 21, 2007 Nice Camy! Anybody remember the song Delerious by Prince? For some reason, I though of it while reading the poem. Link to comment
Camy Posted February 24, 2007 Author Report Share Posted February 24, 2007 Thanks, chaps! Link to comment
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