EleCivil Posted August 25, 2007 Report Share Posted August 25, 2007 [Nowherebound] We left our homes in the name of discovery That the eyes of far-off traffic lights Might gaze upon our faces To see us glaring back, unafraid, Grins challenging with whatever truths were pulled From the bleeding gums of our hometowns. Under cover of darkness and with false alibis We took to seeking truths on the back of our own lies, With windows deeply tinted to invite all observers To taste the unknown and lust for answers, To cup their hands around their eyes And press their faces against our outlines. We were of the age That most would call “impressionable” And true, we craved impressions For what greater offense than emptiness Exists for three blank pages Once told the traits of ink? We planned to vandalize our tongues With all the words they marked unworthy, Planned to stay up late and think of ways To make them disapprove. We planned to carry our own minds so far We'd find them of no use. And when they came across us, We pounded fists against the sidewalk Beat our chests, sang of ideals And tore hearts to the ground For the fact that we still registered visible Proved to us our failures. - Link to comment
blue Posted August 27, 2007 Report Share Posted August 27, 2007 Angst. Ennui. Being dissatisfied with life's illusions or delusions. Very good poem, EleCivil. Oh yeah, I've been there too, but in a different way. Most of us get through it with a little help and lots of toughness. I think midwesterners call it "grit" or "sand." I'd say, be gritty, be sandy, and don't give up. You guys and girls out there are stronger than you think you are, even when you don't feel strong enough. You might even find a friend who's strong enough to help you out. -- And when life throws dirt at ya -- throw it back! Link to comment
Codey Posted September 5, 2007 Report Share Posted September 5, 2007 And when life throws dirt at ya -- throw it back Nah...just add water and make a mud pie and tell them it's chocolate! Codey Link to comment
Guest Rustic Monk Posted September 17, 2007 Report Share Posted September 17, 2007 you need to publish, dude. Link to comment
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