Guest Rustic Monk Posted February 29, 2008 Report Share Posted February 29, 2008 i thought i got it easy i thought it was all so figured out but that floor beneath me was as easily taken out i thought it was the end i thought the beginning was far behind but it's me, the one that tends to look past the cracks that grow in time i thought i was the leader man, i thought i was no one's punk now i'm working water heaters neck deep in someone else's junk i thought i was observant i believed in competence but look now, mama fishing toys out of the vents thought i'd drop red hot lines but the boiling's stopped baring the bottom of the pot i thought .... i don't know what i thought i didn't give a fuck i thought i'd try my luck i thought gabriel duncan Link to comment
dude Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 Ouch. I can feel it. Ditto! Link to comment
Tragic Rabbit Posted March 1, 2008 Report Share Posted March 1, 2008 Again as always, RM, you've managed to capture with well-sharpened words a painful moment that we can all identify with. Very nicely done! You're a gifted poet and I love you. Kisses... TR Link to comment
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