Deanbn1990 Posted April 13, 2010 Report Share Posted April 13, 2010 THE SAME There's a voice that's screaming inside me "Why can't I be the same?" Like the rest of my generation Fit into the teenage frame. They hate me because we're wealthy The money is not mine. I don't want the things they buy me. I just want a bit of their time. I can't help finding learning so easy Why am I hated for that? Why resent me cause I am clever? It's like hating a guy 'cos he's fat. I don't like the music you rave to But I don't make fun of you. I listen to classic for pleasure Why does that so upset you? My sexual feelings confuse me I don't feel I'm part of the norm But who can I talk to about it? Admitting would cause such a storm. You think that my life is so perfect Big house and money to spare. If only you knew what the truth was, But I doubt that you'd really care. I hate it that I am so different I don't like the person I am. So why do I just go on living, Yes living a life that's a sham. You hate me because I am different But if I do you a fave; Remove this wart from your presence Would you come and visit my grave? I doubt it; I'd still be neglected A stone carved out with my name. Like so many else in our churchyard Unloved, but at last I'm the same. Link to comment
Bruin Fisher Posted April 14, 2010 Report Share Posted April 14, 2010 What a great piece of work, very accomplished. You tell your story comprehensively and directly, and it comes across with force. I hope you no longer feel that way - no-one's going to treat you that way here at Awesomedude! This is the first of your work I've read and I'm much impressed. Thanks for posting! Link to comment
Sign Of A Flatline Posted June 11, 2010 Report Share Posted June 11, 2010 I think this is really goo, speaks to me the whole teenager thing is spot on, its perfectly crafted to get what you want. you should keep writing. but as mentioned i'm pleased and relieved your not still going through this. its hell P Link to comment
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