Remembrances by Codey

[Graeme]

Nicely done, Codey!

If there is a flaw in it, it is that the reader has to know who you are to understand part of the ending. I wasn't sure when I first read it if it was the rememberances of a fictional narrator, but I'm guessing the narrator is you. The references at the end don't make a lot of sense otherwise.

Congratulations! A well written short story. 8)

See? Prose isn't that bad....

Graeme

[blue]

"Remembrances" has been corrected for spelling and grammar. But the style is all his own. Great work, Codey.

[carolinascribbler]

Codey,

I found this story to be heartfelt and touching. It's kind of odd, because, I found myself doing something similar one Sunday, a few weeks ago. I drove around to several of the places I lived when I was a kid. It was a very reflective day for me.

Kudos, Codey! :D

Johnny

[Jamie]

I finally got to this story. (so much to read so little time)

Once again Cody as I have written to you in the past, you have a genuine talent - poetry or prose.

It looks at the past in a nostalgic way without being cloy. It also looks to the future with promise. It's obvious that it comes from inside of you - that's what makes all good writing genuine and true.

Keep tapping that source... it won't let you down.

Jamie

[EleCivil]

Yeah, good work, Codey. Like Jaime said, your prose is as good as your poetry. Keep it up.