Graeme Posted April 17, 2005 Report Share Posted April 17, 2005 Nicely done, Codey! If there is a flaw in it, it is that the reader has to know who you are to understand part of the ending. I wasn't sure when I first read it if it was the rememberances of a fictional narrator, but I'm guessing the narrator is you. The references at the end don't make a lot of sense otherwise. Congratulations! A well written short story. 8) See? Prose isn't that bad.... Graeme Quote Link to comment
blue Posted April 17, 2005 Report Share Posted April 17, 2005 "Remembrances" has been corrected for spelling and grammar. But the style is all his own. Great work, Codey. Quote Link to comment
carolinascribbler Posted April 18, 2005 Report Share Posted April 18, 2005 Codey, I found this story to be heartfelt and touching. It's kind of odd, because, I found myself doing something similar one Sunday, a few weeks ago. I drove around to several of the places I lived when I was a kid. It was a very reflective day for me. Kudos, Codey! :D Johnny Quote Link to comment
Jamie Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 I finally got to this story. (so much to read so little time) Once again Cody as I have written to you in the past, you have a genuine talent - poetry or prose. It looks at the past in a nostalgic way without being cloy. It also looks to the future with promise. It's obvious that it comes from inside of you - that's what makes all good writing genuine and true. Keep tapping that source... it won't let you down. Jamie Quote Link to comment
EleCivil Posted April 24, 2005 Report Share Posted April 24, 2005 Yeah, good work, Codey. Like Jaime said, your prose is as good as your poetry. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment
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