vwl Posted June 16, 2013 Report Share Posted June 16, 2013 A story that is starting well is Carma Klown by z119z. Three installments have been posted with several chapters per installment. It is very well written, well constructed and looks to be fine. A quibble: the sex in chapter 1 seems a bit pro forma -- it is Nifty, after all. The second chapter is gruesome, but it introduces the mystery in the story. Recommended. The first installment is at http://www.nifty.org//nifty/gay/relationships/the-carma-klown/the-carma-klown-1 Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 Interesting. Defiantly not boring. Here's the chapter list. http://nifty.nisusnet.com/nifty/gay/relationships/the-carma-klown/ Link to comment
The Pecman Posted June 17, 2013 Report Share Posted June 17, 2013 I agree with Lugnutz: very interesting story, not what I was expecting, and the author has talent. Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted June 23, 2013 Report Share Posted June 23, 2013 A new chapter is up. The plot thickens. Link to comment
vwl Posted June 25, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 25, 2013 Chapter 5 is up today http://www.nifty.org//nifty/gay/relationships/the-carma-klown/the-carma-klown-5 An experienced writer holds forth in a continually well-done story. Link to comment
dude Posted June 28, 2013 Report Share Posted June 28, 2013 hmmm... not my cup of tea. If a story hasn't piqued my interest by the middle of the second chapter, it usually won;t. Link to comment
vwl Posted June 30, 2013 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2013 Chapter 6 is up. I'm having problems with the link, so please use the link to Chapter 5. The cyberspace mystery continues with flair. Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted June 30, 2013 Report Share Posted June 30, 2013 This story is turning into more of a mystery as the chapters go on. Still not boring. Link to comment
vwl Posted July 2, 2013 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2013 Chapter 7 is up, in which one of the protagonists Chinese heritage comes into play. Link to comment
dude Posted July 4, 2013 Report Share Posted July 4, 2013 OK, OK.... I got past the upsetting video and I'm hoplessly hooked! Link to comment
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