bi_janus Posted December 9, 2013 Report Share Posted December 9, 2013 DriftingBi Janus Out on the perilous deepWhere dangers silently creepAnd storms so violently sweepYou're drifting too far from the shore Drifting too far from the shore (from the shore)Drifting too far from the shore (peaceful shore)Come to Jesus today, let him show you the wayYou're drifting too far from the shore —Charles E. Moody (1923) The shore vaguely recalledthe expanse now homeand no clear pathI shall find my own Storm spun or glassno avatar stridesthe deep oceanno idea instructs The great vehiclecarries me onI am all and aloneboat and sailor Starless sky comfortsBoundless sea comfortsShoreless, I came from thisto this I gladly return For the shore is a prison Quote Link to comment
Nigel Gordon Posted December 9, 2013 Report Share Posted December 9, 2013 I like it. Quote Link to comment
Merkin Posted December 9, 2013 Report Share Posted December 9, 2013 The human landscape can be stark indeed. Quote Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted December 16, 2013 Report Share Posted December 16, 2013 An insight from the surface of the ocean is none the less than from the depths of the mind. Nicely done bi-janus. Quote Link to comment
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