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Eureka Moments in Writing



I was working on Leviathan Rusts earlier today, after watching The Big Lebowski and splitting a pot of coffee with a local DJ (Yes, it's always a wacky adventure!). So, amped up on caffeine and with a head full of surreal scenes and strange dialogue, I had one of those Eureka Moments. The entire plot became clear to me. The beginning, middle, and end all aligned before my eyes, and the characters' arcs all fell into place.

I had some basic ideas and a first chapter written, but now it's all pieced together. And I'm thinking this might be my best story, yet. I'm excited. I love it when a plan comes together.

Of course, now I've got to tweak the first chapter some more. Remember when I said in a previous post that it would be released in December '09? Don't count on it. I mean, there's still a couple days left in December, but I'll still need to get it edited, and then it'll probably be a few days until The Dude and the CW Web Guys get it upped. So, January 2010. A new story for a new year.

After all, anyone who's followed my stories before knows better than to believe me when I mention a deadline, right?

If you want some hints about what it'll be like, read on. If you'd rather be surprised, stop here.


Last chance.


No, seriously this time.


Don't say I didn't warn you.

First, a recap:

Leaves and Lunatics - My first attempt at writing a novel/novella/serial story. At the time, I was aiming for Nifty Archives quality, because that was about the extent of my experience with net fiction. I started writing it when I was 17 and fresh out of high school. It was a somewhat sappy romance story with a lot of editing mistakes and some plot points that still make me cringe. The story didn't really go anywhere. But it did have some characters that I like. I rushed the ending because I had the idea-seeds for Laika and I wanted to get started on it.

Laika - My second serial novel. As I explained in the Afterward, I played around a bit with symbols and theme (socks = freedom). It fits a lot of the characteristics of a screwball comedy - A central romance, romance across cultures/socio-economic strata, fast-paced dialogue, false identities, some physical comedy, etc. I wasn't as happy with the ending as I could have been - I kind of ran out of steam, and the last couple chapters fizzled out and included some scenes that didn't really go anywhere. Still, I'm happy with how it turned out.

Now, my current project...

Leviathan Rusts - The third in the "L series", it takes place in the same "universe" as the first two stories. Keep an eye out for returning characters. It takes place about six years after L&L, and about two years after Laika. The main characters are college aged. It does not take place in Curson, MI or Gordon, OH, but in a new city - the college town of Milkthistle, OH. The protagonist may be difficult for readers to relate to (except for one or two of them, who might get him right away).

As for genre...well, it's different. At some points, darker than Laika. At others, lighter than L&L. That's as much as I'll say - you can see the rest for yourselves. Here's some hints.





Update: First chapter has been sent to a (potential) editor.


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Ah, there, you see. I knew there'd be something good to look forward to this year. I'd say W00T, but I don't want to be pigeonholed.Oh, bollocks to it.W00T!!!! :hug:

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Ele being self-deprecating.I can't wait to read Leviathan Rusts. Loved the other 'L' series stories.'L' Series, in the world of Canon SLR cameras, means 'the best quality we can achieve, professional grade'. And they mark their most expensive best quality lenses with an L. Appropriate for Elecivil stories.

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"...splitting a pot of coffee with a local DJ." Hint of a love life? No, don't explain. I prefer the ambiguity.Please don't sweat the deadlines with apologies. Laika was such an improvement on Leaves And Lunatics that I'm sure this new work will be worth the wait.

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Great first chapter, EleCivil! Already some lovably quirky, entertaining characters. Your stories are always great, and this one is no exception. I can't wait for the next chapter (:

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Now! I believe there's a thing called a second chapter - if I'm not much mistaken. If I'm not (much mistaken, that is) where is it? Hmm.This Inquisitive Emu wants to know.Not that I'm in any way hassling. Goodness me no. Lord forbid I should do something so ... hassley. I was just mildly wondering in the way that one wonders.Umm, that's it then. <cheesy (but still very cute) grin>Ave 'n' all. ;)

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