Just to be clear, this is now my favourite novel on this website, that I have read, It one of the only ones that caused tears for me. If my only complaint is that it was not long enough, then that is good, right?
The story line is publishable, people would be interested in this (if you removed the move gay scenes, such as cock grabbing, and masturbation.) It could be as large as the hunger games.
I look forward to reading more of your stories.