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Oliver

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    Netherlands
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    Reading, writing (in Dutch)

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  1. I read it al while ago, and it sure is a good read. Despite some disaster and mistakes, it was a feel good story to enjoy.
  2. Scary, and happy it never happened to me. 😉
  3. I like how this is developing, together with David himself. Hate the cliff hangers though. 😉 Well done again, Cole. For me, you always find the right pace, not too fast, not too slow. I like the flow, the development. Ok, I admit, the cliff hangers too. 🙂
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  5. Nice collage of short story-cul-de-sac's, Cole, 5 feel-good's! Must agree to Merkin, "Recovery" screems for a sequel.... 🙂
  6. That was a good ending. Quick and sudden, but good. Thank you, Cole!
  7. Well, you succeded. 🙂 Please do not be mad if I will try that technique in one of my stories, sometimes.
  8. What I find disturbing about the multiple first-person narration is that Cole is capable of misuse that to pull a cliff hanger over the next chapter to the one after that. Make that annoying. I want to know about the interview between Robin and Daryl! Well done Cole, really well done. I like what you do here. I am using the word "annoying" with joy! 🙂
  9. It sure is! I hope it will develop wit the same level of witty humour in it.
  10. In the case of Cole's stories: I like to be hooked. 🙂
  11. That what I like about narrators in Cole's stories. They got a witty way of fixing things. And they got humour. As does Cole. Thanks again for a new wunderful story, Cole!
  12. Thank you Cole, I love stories that end happy!
  13. And I know exactly how that will be, when Cole wrote it. Well written list of starters and main courts. Dessert: "You'll see...." 😋
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