Pedro Posted October 18, 2018 Report Share Posted October 18, 2018 Pedro has been on vacation in the US. Like Peter in his story 'The Tourist' he has been indulging his interest in railroads. Also like Peter, he met someone called Lucas: Lucas ........... A boyhood interest the same, In the railroad car you came Sat opposite to share the ride, It was foretold I’d meet your name. Not shy, no wanting face to hide Along the seat made impish slide And ‘til closed on safety grounds Too far through window leaning tried. Delight at all the railroad sounds Your curiosity knows no bounds And as you ate your picnic food Emotion in my heart compounds Because your table manners crude, Which really could be said most rude, Amuse me so that we both smile As I drink my coffee stewed. At times the other watch awhile And find no sign of risk or guile And times we look and watch the view So bond with every passing mile. And then you touch me with your shoe So footsie I would play with you But romance is not the game For you, my friend, are only two. ……………………………………. © copyright pedro October 2018 Link to comment
Merkin Posted October 19, 2018 Report Share Posted October 19, 2018 Awww. How sweet to find such rapport. A worthy 'Boys on Trains' interlude. I won't ask what was added to your stewed coffee. Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted October 19, 2018 Report Share Posted October 19, 2018 Very nice, even the twist at the end. C Link to comment
Pedro Posted October 21, 2018 Author Report Share Posted October 21, 2018 Thanks guys, I’m pleased you enjoyed it. Never having had much dealing with kids of any age since I was one myself, I find small kids, past the puke, piss and poop stage, can be fascinating to watch as they interact with their surroundings. But it was the sense of the inevitable that got me when I saw his name, Lucas, written on the side of his drink bottle. Link to comment
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