Pummeled, All Alone

[Madrigal]

Please don't be alarmed, it's just a poem :D.

All alone, in this miserable world,

Trapped by a door whose color mocks my skin,

Whose walls are hard as earth?much harder than my skull.

All alone, in this joyless ballroom bore,

Glaring at my dancing kin,

Who twirl amidst a herd much dumber than a troll.

All alone, in a heartless reddened core,

Where veins and vessels filled with sin

Are pummeled by your smell.

The pumping turns so violent,

My mind dissociates:

I talk, I hear no word.

All alone, in mind not body,

Touched by a stranger on the bedroom floor.

[Camy]

Wonderful imagery, Maddy.

[Guest Rustic Monk]

this is amazing.

[Bruin Fisher]

Please don't be alarmed, it's just a poem :D.

Thanks for the disclaimer - very necessary!

A very powerful poem, Maddy! Kudos

Bruin

[DesDownunder]

stunning,

evocative imagery,

that gives so much and yet leaves you wondering.

As Camy said, wonderful.

[Madrigal]

Thanks for the comments, guys :D. It's always nice to wake up to compliments ^_^.

Maddy (: