Tragic Rabbit Posted May 14, 2010 Report Share Posted May 14, 2010 Understanding Anemia There is a kind of freedom in frailty, in bodily poverty, endgame & emptiness; when all that you loved is far away, gone; all that you live for - removed, distant: timeless as an old photograph or gravestone epitaph For who or what can disappoint you, hurt you, maim your marred soul when all of your thoughts turn inward and all your ideas become either specific as sputum, bacteria, germs or airy as philosophical terms Few things concentrate the mind like weaknesses of the body; when your day's goal is to eat well and not to fall, fade away, in public: invisible as ghosts or hope and dead as any dream Link to comment
TracyMN Posted May 14, 2010 Report Share Posted May 14, 2010 Poetry for Lab Techs, and other Human Organisms It is as I would imagine it, and I did the moment I read your mind right here on the page. Wonderful. Haunting too, in a way. The same way I find myself taking a deep breath when looking at the red cells of a person with Sickle Cell Anemia at 50x. Thanks for your effort, and for sharing. Tracy Link to comment
Merkin Posted May 14, 2010 Report Share Posted May 14, 2010 An enormously affecting poem, concise yet filled with a complex tale to tell. Nothing anemic about these charged words. I especially liked these lines: Few things concentrate the mind like weaknesses of the body Thanks for this, TR James Link to comment
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