DJ Posted May 22, 2005 Report Share Posted May 22, 2005 The alarm go's off reality slipping back into consciousness eyes begging to remain closed Faint thoughts and shadows from the minds night wanderings not really remembering to illusive to grasp and hold. Link to comment
Codey Posted May 22, 2005 Report Share Posted May 22, 2005 Another good one dj. You captured the nature of dreams just right. Codey Link to comment
Dewey Posted May 22, 2005 Report Share Posted May 22, 2005 Very good description. I like it. Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted May 22, 2005 Report Share Posted May 22, 2005 Gabe- This one is fit for the front page. Link to comment
aj Posted May 23, 2005 Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 Hey DJ-- Great poem! I would suggest, however, that you check out the thread "Ben Blue" in Limerick Lane that talks about "to, too, and two..." lol. cheers! aj Link to comment
DJ Posted May 24, 2005 Author Report Share Posted May 24, 2005 Thanks guys :o .James i tried to reply back to you,but its not letting me send PM,but thanks.No AJ,i will think a little better as to what too i use,i've seen the "to" posts ,i have to learn the right ones Link to comment
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