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Guest Dabeagle

I read the first chapter, and I had read it before and stopped. I'm a sucker for the name Jake ( no idea why) and that's why I had checked this title before. I'm guessing there must be improvement because the first chapter left me thinking it was all narrative. The title character is described as perfect, except this tiny flaw, that he was gay. I have noticed this trend of making characters 'supermen' except for this fact, as if they need to overcompensate for being gay.

Chapter one was disappointing for me, but I'll give it a few more and see if a rocky start (in my overblown opinion) can be recovered from; I know I've had my own share of slow starts.

EDIT: It had some improvements, imo, about chapter three-four.

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