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Jake's Hand


Cole Parker

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  • 4 weeks later...

I must admit whilst I enjoyed the first part of this story it did not grip me the same way as some vwl's other work have. Now with chapter 5 we have moved into a second phase of the story and it seems a lot more edgy and engaging than the first part. I am looking forward to what is to come.

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  • 3 months later...

Rereading this one gave me great pleasure. I admire especially the pace, measured and leisurely without losing its impetus. This is an art I desire and have never been able to master. The reworking of the latter part of the story is an inspired improvement, and the desire to make the relationship between Robbie's son and Jake sharper is realized . Thanks to vwl for continuing to develop his work. Il miglio fabbro.

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