Trab Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 All the while I was reading this story, I kept waiting for the gratuitous gay sex, and it was not forthcoming. Instead I read a story of love, uncertainty, forgiveness, and pain. I read about consequences of a careless act, and avoiding telling the truth. I read a remarkable story. Thank-you Nickolas. Link to comment
Graeme Posted July 11, 2007 Report Share Posted July 11, 2007 It is a very different story than that normally found when looking for gay fiction, and even more remarkable when you consider that the story was written by a teenager. While I might have a few minor problems with the story, overall I was very impressed. It really came over as having been written by someone in their sixties. Link to comment
Nickolas James Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 All the while I was reading this story, I kept waiting for the gratuitous gay sex, and it was not forthcoming. Instead I read a story of love, uncertainty, forgiveness, and pain. I read about consequences of a careless act, and avoiding telling the truth. I read a remarkable story. Thank-you Nickolas. Thanks Trab. I was really nervous about writing a story like this, so it makes me feel good to get positive feedback. Chapter one got me more flames in one week than all of the flames I'd ever gotten combined since I first started writing. Link to comment
Nickolas James Posted July 12, 2007 Report Share Posted July 12, 2007 It is a very different story than that normally found when looking for gay fiction, and even more remarkable when you consider that the story was written by a teenager. While I might have a few minor problems with the story, overall I was very impressed. It really came over as having been written by someone in their sixties. Well, I have to admit that I had some pretty good beta readers Link to comment
jack scribe Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 It is a very different story than that normally found when looking for gay fiction, and even more remarkable when you consider that the story was written by a teenager. Came late to the party...but made it, nonetheless. Just had a chance to read Chapter One and the emotion-packed synoposis of Raymond's earlier family life. Killing off child characters is a tough call, but it is part of life. I say 'eff' the flames. Look forward to continuing the story. BTW - not to be drippy, but it's Farrah Fawcett, not Faucet. Jack Link to comment
TalonRider Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 BTW - not to be drippy, but it's Farrah Fawcett, not Faucet. Jack Oops, my fault. I missed it. Jan Link to comment
dude Posted August 2, 2007 Report Share Posted August 2, 2007 Kublai Khan.... Jeez now I have to go back and change all the chapters and short stories to read 'By Kublai Khan' ??? Link to comment
Nickolas James Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 Kublai Khan....Jeez now I have to go back and change all the chapters and short stories to read 'By Kublai Khan' ??? lol....I probably wouldn't do that. I might become the Gay Jedi again Link to comment
Nickolas James Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 Came late to the party...but made it, nonetheless. Just had a chance to read Chapter One and the emotion-packed synoposis of Raymond's earlier family life. Killing off child characters is a tough call, but it is part of life. I say 'eff' the flames. Look forward to continuing the story.BTW - not to be drippy, but it's Farrah Fawcett, not Faucet. Jack Thanks for the compliment, Jack. BTW, you're like the seventh person to tell me that about Farrah Fawcett . *Ahem* :coughs:-Jan-:coughs: Link to comment
Nickolas James Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 Oops, my fault. I missed it.Jan I still love you, Jan :) Link to comment
TalonRider Posted August 4, 2007 Report Share Posted August 4, 2007 I still love you, Jan :) And I love you too, my friend. Link to comment
Nickolas James Posted August 23, 2007 Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 And I love you too, my friend. More than roller coasters?? Link to comment
Camy Posted August 23, 2007 Report Share Posted August 23, 2007 It really came over as having been written by someone in their sixties. Heh. Camy Link to comment
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