Jason Rimbaud Posted February 8, 2010 Report Share Posted February 8, 2010 What Have You Done? By: Jason Rimbaud He was in the shadows Standing alone Was he there, was he not? I stepped up A mask covering my eyes The air was still and so was he I walked up holding my breath In truth I knew This was the moment of his death I had but one chance I grabbed his arm and pulled him close Wanting him to savor the warm night air What have you done? He screamed to the night Then over to the wall His back towards me Smaller and vulnerable than in life His hair damp with sweat And clinging to his ears and neck Our love was suppose to protect us It didn?t Our love was suppose to heal us It didn?t I had begged you not to leave me You did A finger on the hammer sounded a click His body still and red Is this what our love looks like? Quote Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Wow! C Quote Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Stunning, Jason. Quote Link to comment
colinian Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Man, Jason, that's deep as a grave and scary as hearing that click. Colin Quote Link to comment
Merkin Posted February 9, 2010 Report Share Posted February 9, 2010 Jason shows us what could happen when 'wanting' turns into 'keeping' and 'loving' transforms into 'owning.' A terrible lesson. Quote Link to comment
Sign Of A Flatline Posted February 10, 2010 Report Share Posted February 10, 2010 amazing Quote Link to comment
Jason Rimbaud Posted February 11, 2010 Author Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 This really a small piece that's connected to a much larger piece. As of right now, it's about twenty pages. I know.... But I'm working on the editing part. When it's finish I'll post it here. Thanks everyone Jason Quote Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted February 11, 2010 Report Share Posted February 11, 2010 Jason I will open a coffee shop and sell coffee and cake to all the members who are waiting to read your completed work. So don't be too quick or we won't make lots of money selling the coffee and cakes. Quote Link to comment
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