Camy Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Splish Splash by Camy Splish-splash Hand in the hand the boy and girl run giggling through the surf. Dish-dash She has eyes for him, but he has eyes for another ... boy. Splish-smash Tears run down her face as she realises true love is no disgrace. Kiss-kiss Hands in hands they are three. Maybe odd, but still a loving family. First published in 'Ocean.' The 2011 poetry antholgy at The Author's Haunt. Quote Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Delightful, but dare I say, life is a beach? Sorree. Nice poem Camy, we need these positive portrayals of family life. Quote Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted May 9, 2011 Report Share Posted May 9, 2011 Family life and human understanding and acceptance, too. C Quote Link to comment
The Pecman Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Hey, I thought this was gonna relate to Bobby Darin: "splish-splash, I was takin' a bath... long about a Saturday night..." Quote Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted May 10, 2011 Report Share Posted May 10, 2011 Hey, I thought this was gonna relate to Bobby Darin: "splish-splash, I was takin' a bath... long about a Saturday night..." No, this was more about who was taking a bath with whom. C Quote Link to comment
blue Posted December 10, 2011 Report Share Posted December 10, 2011 Let's say it's somewhere between that and Rub-a-dub-dub, Three men in a tub. Only one's a woman. Oh, how times change. Hmm, three men in a tub.... Shhh, Blue, you'll burst a bubble.... Quite liked this poem, Camy. Quote Link to comment
Camy Posted December 10, 2011 Author Report Share Posted December 10, 2011 Why, thank you Ben. Quote Link to comment
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