DesDownunder Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 Star Walks By DesDownUnder Come with me, Take my hand, And leave this land, To walk amongst the stars. Step off the Earth, So you can see, The planet of our birth, Spinning in infinity, Orbiting the sun, In spiralling galaxies, Amidst clouded nebulas, And singularities, But none so unique As the love we give and make, With every breath we take. For we are humanity, In love with life, If only we would see, We glow like stars, As we walk in space, Over Earthly land, Hand in hand, You and me. Link to comment
Gee Whillickers Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 That's lovely! Bravo! Link to comment
Trab Posted July 7, 2012 Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 Damned good. Well done, Des. Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted July 7, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 7, 2012 Thanks, Gee and Bart. I'm glad you liked it. Link to comment
Richard Norway Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Thanks Des. That was not soul searching (as you can do), but rather a wonderful trip into feelings (as you can do so wonderfully too). I loved it. The ending was sublime. Link to comment
Camy Posted July 8, 2012 Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Super, Des, really super. It reminded me of . Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted July 8, 2012 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2012 Thank you Colin, Richard and Camy. I love Monty Python and its ages since I saw that clip. Just totally off-the-planet-wonderful. Thanks again Camy. And Richard, no soul-searchers were harmed in the writing of this poem. Link to comment
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