Gee Whillickers Posted August 23, 2013 Report Share Posted August 23, 2013 Hmm, this explains a lot about my writing problems as of late. Apparently my problem is all of the above. Especially number four. I don't think I've ever done number 4. Link to comment
The Pecman Posted August 23, 2013 Report Share Posted August 23, 2013 Actually, there's some good advice in there. #5, "Stop being boring," makes total sense. Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted August 24, 2013 Report Share Posted August 24, 2013 As a sideline, the guy who wrote that teaches Depression 101. C Link to comment
Guest Dabeagle Posted August 24, 2013 Report Share Posted August 24, 2013 Gee, start with the car blowing up! Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted August 24, 2013 Report Share Posted August 24, 2013 Gee, start with the car blowing up! He did but burned his mouth on the tail pipe. Link to comment
Gee Whillickers Posted August 24, 2013 Author Report Share Posted August 24, 2013 Gee, start with the car blowing up! Okay: Amy closed her eyes and forced herself to relax, to ease the tension in her shoulders, in her jaw, in her fists. The piercing wails just would not cease, and were penetrating directly to her spine, making her thoughts muddled and confused. She couldn't think, couldn't act. She wanted to wail and scream right back at the source of the problem. Amy glanced at the balloon. A perfectly good one, she had thought. She spent good money on it. How was she supposed to know, as she blew it up for her distraught son's third birthday party, that he wanted a plane, not a car balloon. Link to comment
Guest Dabeagle Posted August 25, 2013 Report Share Posted August 25, 2013 He's tricksy, that one. Link to comment
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