bi_janus Posted September 3, 2013 Report Share Posted September 3, 2013 A Day's WorkBi Janus Only those who have let goevery possession,every dear heart,every belief and doodad,every desire for more,every desire for less,every friend and lover,every parent and child,every tenet of faith,every grasping, Only those who have let goevery valuable and raiment,having nothing more to lose,are not cowed in fearat the dawn of day,at the end of days. Yet, this evening, with relaxed handsI carry with me still,just on my fingertips,her and him.Perhaps the groanin the last exhalationwill be worth their weight. Link to comment
Merkin Posted September 3, 2013 Report Share Posted September 3, 2013 Oh, this is so good. Link to comment
Camy Posted September 5, 2013 Report Share Posted September 5, 2013 Not to take away from the poem as a whole but that middle stanza is truly stunning! I'm going to stick it on the wall as a reminder to pare down the 'stuff' I've inexorably surrounded myself with.... Or does that defeat the purpose...? Maybe it's a koan? Link to comment
EleCivil Posted September 5, 2013 Report Share Posted September 5, 2013 I love this. The whole set up and delivery model of "Here's a deeply held belief that I know I should follow, BUT..." Goes well with your Janus theme, too. Link to comment
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