Jump to content
Res Ipsa Loquitur

"Love Me"

Recommended Posts

Honestly, if I read it and someone else wrote it I would think that it was crude and pretty much elementary, but I guess I should start somewhere. Thanks for the read.

Sorry, mate, but you're so wrong about this. It just isn't crude or elementary. Far from it. This is well crafted and powerful poetry and packs quite a punch. If this is your first offering then it's very impressive. Please post some more!!

Bruin

Link to comment

I don't "do" poetry, with the odd limerick being my best effort, but I can appreciate your work. Honestly though, I just read it as prose, as I do all poems, and take in the message that way. It IS powerful, and exposes your angst and uncertainties, hopes and fears. It made me think, and feel compassion; there is nothing more important than communicating those. Well done, and a big hug to you.

Link to comment

Join the conversation

You can post now and register later. If you have an account, sign in now to post with your account.

Guest
Reply to this topic...

×   Pasted as rich text.   Paste as plain text instead

  Only 75 emoji are allowed.

×   Your link has been automatically embedded.   Display as a link instead

×   Your previous content has been restored.   Clear editor

×   You cannot paste images directly. Upload or insert images from URL.

Loading...


×
×
  • Create New...