Beta Reader Needed

[Guest Dabeagle]

I need someone who can be critical of the story, spotting holes or stuff that just doesn't make sense, but not be offended if it make sense in the overall story that I'm telling. In other words, sometimes bits don't make sense until later on.

Regardless, I need a critical reader for content, not editing. I'm inconsistent, but seem to be in a groove right now.

[Lugnutz]

I would offer, but there are others here with much better eyes in spotting things in question.

[Camy]

In other words, sometimes bits don't make sense until later on.

Ooooh ... foreshadowing.

[Nigel Gordon]

I need someone who can be critical of the story, spotting holes or stuff that just doesn't make sense, but not be offended if it make sense in the overall story that I'm telling. In other words, sometimes bits don't make sense until later on.

Regardless, I need a critical reader for content, not editing. I'm inconsistent, but seem to be in a groove right now.

So long as you don't want an editor, a job at which I know I am crap, I'll beta-read for you.

[Guest Dabeagle]

Thank you, Nigel. I'll email you shortly.