Revelations by Alan Dwight

[Lugnutz]

Book two of this story is starting. I read the chapter and thought it sounded familier. Ends up it was. It was book one.

http://awesomedude.com/alan_dwight/revelations-ii/index.htm

[Nigel Gordon]

I am so pleased to see Revelations II start, it will give me a chance to follow the story of two of my favorite characters.

[Lugnutz]

It's not posted in one lump this time either.

[Nick Deverill]

I read the published chapter, and then re-read Revelations 1. Another reason to now wish my life away!

[Lugnutz]

Same here. Had to get requainted with them.

[Rutabaga]

When I saw the posting of Revelations II, I decided to go back and read Revelations (I) first. I wasn't sure if I had read it before but quickly realized that I had. No problem -- it's a great story with a lot of drama. Now I have read the opening chapter of Revelations II and I'm looking forward to seeing how these guys make out after being required to grow up so quickly.

R

[Rutabaga]

Interesting that the story is evolving into one about Derek.

R

[alandwight]

Thanks folks for all your comments. I hope you will like the rest of part II. I'm not wild about posting serially as you know but I guess it will work. Thanks for reading!

[colinian]

Thanks folks for all your comments. I hope you will like the rest of part II. I'm not wild about posting serially as you know but I guess it will work. Thanks for reading!

It's working because we're eager for the next chapter. Hint, hint!

Colin

[Rutabaga]

And so the tale comes to an end. I have to admit that I was surprised (shocked) by what Garrett did, but was also pretty amazed by the virulence of Greg's reaction. I'm not sure whether Garrett really learned a lesson, but it seems like Josh and Greg did.

R

[Nigel Gordon]

And so the tale comes to an end. I have to admit that I was surprised (shocked) by what Garrett did, but was also pretty amazed by the virulence of Greg's reaction. I'm not sure whether Garrett really learned a lesson, but it seems like Josh and Greg did.

It's to be hoped that Garrett did learn a lesson, though I'm not also convinced by his actions. Hope we find out how Josh and Greg get on, it is not going to be easy for them.