Thirdeye

You?ve clearly become disinterested In what I have got to say I lay here grasping for a breath Just to watch you turn away When did things go so wrong At what point did you change I use to feel you?d care If I stopped breathing How could I be so wrong You left us all here grieving In your selfish quest You forgot all about your charges In your wake you left a mess And only me behind to clean it Didn?t matter I was in no shape to do so But you wouldn?t understand this You never once came to me Just to ask if I was ok The only time you looked at me Was to complain about your life Even when I hid away Didn?t even know I was not in sight Never cared how I felt About the split in our home you marched along in your war ignorant to the damage made Never knew how close I came To falling off that razor blade how you beseech us now To return to your side You tell us how your proud To have made it out of hell Was it really that bad Everything was done To accommodate your needs As you marched along changed Never heard pleas So glad your happy now though Wish you all the best

Can't take credit, Its actually Pink Floyd from "Welcome to the Machine" off of the Album Wish you where here. I just couldn't fit it in :D

Read Broken, I highly recommend it

For away one who has not read Broken yet or is not at Chapter 15 yet, I would read that and then re-read this and it makes it all the more powerful. Jim you really have got a way with words

Damn Codey that was great! As already said really an eye opener

Wow. Powerful stuff Jim. Don't really know what else to say

Damn kids! Show some respect! What, did you think you invented staying up wasted all night!? You should have been here for the seventies. Cyber-sex my ass... :-D I've heard about your superbowl parties.......I bow to the master :smt033 :-D

LMAO!!! Atleast no one has said Billy Ray sirus or Garth Brooks......yet anyway Have you pick up Francis the Mute yet?

In light of this new albatross The mall will be closed today The parasites are shaken by this To that we extend condolences But our culture is falling away The vultures fly in chaos Looking for a carcass to strip The savagery is always on tap Left with this milky water turned gray The pushing an shoving is quite severe as regal masses pick away the kill The noises they make are so trite This is the game they love to play Always a whore for yuppie designs Baseless clover in these shallow times It?s the frenzy for greed that truly delights The vultures receive all which they pray Turning a sparrow into cast The method call of the gathering feast Waiting for a deadpan delay Which of us will be a heathen today

We are a perfect concert I can?t say what you can?t hear We are thoughtless perfection As this travesty continues to blow near How long until the day breaks And these cryptic halogens become clear How much longer can we lean for cover While being dressed with this vulgar fear As I lap into the company of cowardice At the place beside me you stand my peer With these hollow makeshift lies Continue to turtle and let discouraged steer Sucked into the vacuum of this repeatable cycle Never the hunter but always the deer These words spin around your ears The meaning forced yet you don?t hear Were stuck long in transit you and me Never the hunter but always the deer We?ll paint on our clown faces Move as if we really here But the echoing of this will bring us cold As the usage of this entity will smear The hollow echo rings as bells Never the hunter but always the deer

How?s it possible to forget how to cry Have I fallen so much That my emotions have run dry Is it hatred towards you for letting me fall Or the feeble fact you won?t let me fly All I ever needed was a reason to stand Yet that?s been forsaken for the hot desert sand But here I walk again with my limbs burning dry I?ll continue to push ahead alone Until once again I?m griped by this tide Someday I?ll find everything I need One day I?ll know what it is to feel pride But really What does it all mean to me If by then I?m already broken inside As the fearful moon shines down Like a label of the cowards who continue to pry I beg and plead for mercy And receive thirty pieces of silver Yet this is the just and forgiven eye I recoil, shake and quiver Ask again for what will be Undelivered Worthlessness is truly your prize And I swear to wear it well Hanging there on each fruitless thought While the bags above my eyes swell Its one feeling left after my body?s holocaust When was it I became a submissive shell Let the rovers run me down And I?d be sure to extend my hand This my patrons is the true hell Forgot the brimstone and fiery ash Your soul burning in your body Is a torment you can?t lash Torture is knowing your hope is a dream Everything you wanted is something you can?t catch The hate inside has prospered for a decade Tell me what?s the cost to oneself to scratch this rash The mirror of despair is not easily matched

Had a upsetting night needed to vent. Thanks!

http://crvboy.com/stories/index.html I haye Nifty also, because most of the time any good stories end up not getting finished or end up getting finished on better site like Dudes, Dewy and a few others

Everything I seek I?ve found was already given away Been second all my life Why would that change today If I were to blend with this crimson Less then a handful who would pray I?ve been walking the wire for a while now As I sit in this blackened room I wonder when It was I finally fell There?s a hole on my soul And it grows deeper I?m slowly dying here As this pain grows steeper Hidden behind my eyes As I try to compensate for this disease Is a pain that lies beneath the heart But I do just what?s needed to please Even as loneliness tears me apart I?d find away home to escape this place But there?s no one waiting for me This sound is more then I can taste Why can?t your cancer be for me There?s a hole on my soul And it grows deeper I?m slowly dying here As this pain grows steeper It?s killing me And they can?t even see It?s killed me Yet, even in death I'm not free

APC, ICP, Fuel, American HiFi. My brothers been to a ton of sevendust concertm he saw them and El Nino last year twice. Lucky bastard has time to go to a ton of concerts, as a matter of fact hes going to see Slipknot tonight in Philly.

Atleast your not going to jail. from aintitcoolnews.com This is terribly uncool. Kid arrested as a terrorist for writing a fictional zombie story... Ahoy, squirts! Quint here. I'm sorry, this isn't movie news or anything even close to being cool. This might stray a bit into some angry political debates below, but I find it hard to believe even the most radical of conservatives can honestly look at a piece of fiction written by a kid, a school assignment no less, and say that warrants him being arrested for terrorist threats. Really, where is the line going to be drawn? His story was about zombies overtaking a school and that was construed as a serious threat made against the school, ignoring the fact that no one in the story is a real person and the school is different. This guy's soon to go on trial for a felony offense and it makes me sick, personally. What's next? Stephen King better watch out because he's murdered thousands of fake people and, like King did in THE STAND, Tom Clancy has set off fake nukes on fake American soil... if that's not a terrorist threat, I don't know what is. Am I the only one ****ed off by this? If you agree that this is just and right, please let me know what I'm overlooking in the talkback below. To me this is so amazingly unAmerican... I can't believe something like this is happening in my country. Here's the full story: Hey Harry, this isn't cool...it's kind of the antithesis of cool. But it's the kind of thing that a lot of people need to know about. We're crossing the line and now I think our freedom is really at stake. CLARK COUNTY Student Arrested For Terroristic Threatening Says Incident A Misunderstanding A George Rogers Clark High School junior arrested Tuesday for making terrorist threats told LEX 18 News Thursday that the "writings" that got him arrested are being taken out of context. Winchester police say William Poole, 18, was taken into custody Tuesday morning. Investigators say they discovered materials at Poole's home that outline possible acts of violence aimed at students, teachers, and police. Poole told LEX 18 that the whole incident is a big misunderstanding. He claims that what his grandparents found in his journal and turned into police was a short story he wrote for English class. "My story is based on fiction," said Poole, who faces a second-degree felony terrorist threatening charge. "It's a fake story. I made it up. I've been working on one of my short stories, (and) the short story they found was about zombies. Yes, it did say a high school. It was about a high school over ran by zombies." Even so, police say the nature of the story makes it a felony. "Anytime you make any threat or possess matter involving a school or function it's a felony in the state of Kentucky," said Winchester Police detective Steven Caudill. Poole disputes that he was threatening anyone. "It didn't mention nobody who lives in Clark County, didn't mention (George Rogers Clark High School), didn't mention no principal or cops, nothing," said Poole. "Half the people at high school know me. They know I'm not that stupid, that crazy." On Thursday, a judge raised Poole's bond from one to five thousand dollars after prosecutors requested it, citing the seriousness of the charge. Poole is being held at the Clark County Detention Center. http://www.lex18.com/global/story.a...tType=Printable

I thought it was very good and was a very good fit with the rest of the stories.

I'm sorry and take full reasonability, and I swear I won't use the school computers.

Wow. School justice is hardly ever reasonable

Found this on another message board, thought it was funny Church Bulletins 1. "Scouts are saving aluminum cans, bottles, and other items to be recycled. Proceeds will be used to cripple children." 2. "Ushers will eat latecomers." 3. "The Ladies Bible Study will be held Thursday morning at 10. All ladies are invited to lunch in the Fellowship Hall after the B.S. is done." 4. "The Pastor would appreciate it if the ladies of the congregation would lend him their electric girdles for the pancake breakfast next Sunday morning." 5. "The audience is asked to remain seated until the end of the recession." 6. "Low Self-Esteem Support Group will meet Thursday at 7 to 8:30 PM. Please use the back door." 7. "Pastor is on vacation. Massages can be given to church secretary." 8. "The third verse of Blessed Assurance will be sung without musical accomplishment." 9. "The Rev. Merriwether spoke briefly, much to the delight of the audience." 10. "The pastor will preach his farewell message, after which the choir will sing, 'Break Forth Into Joy.'" 11. "Next Sunday Mrs. Vinson will be soloist for the morning service. The pastor will then speak on 'It's a Terrible Experience'." 12. "Due to the Rector's illness, Wednesday's healing services will be discontinued until further notice." 13. "Weight Watchers will meet at 7 PM. Please use large double door at the side entrance." 14. "Remember in prayer the many who are sick of our church and community." 15. "The eighth graders will be presenting Shakespeare's Hamlet in the church basement on Friday at 7 PM. The congregation is invited to attend this tragedy." 16. "A song fest was hell at the Methodist church Wednesday." 17. "Today's Sermon: 'How Much Can a Man Drink?' with hymns from a full choir." 18. On a church bulletin during the minister's illness: "God is good - Dr. Hargreaves is better." 19. "Potluck supper: prayer and medication to follow." 20. "The outreach committee has enlisted 25 visitors to make calls on people who are not afflicted with any church."

Suicide note is a great song

I agree with everything said above. The story is great and very touching. I'm also sure that its hard to write at times for you James so I just want to say keep going because the work speaks for itself.

I like it

Another great chapter. I can't wait for Chapter nine to see how Greg reacts.

I was going to say the samething. In some stories the change in point of view can really hurt the flow, but in Angel it moves so smooth and really just adds to the plot.....I don't know if what I said makes sense so I'll agree that its very good.