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A wonderful story, well told and informative. I particularly admired the way that the story is structured. It is so easy with this type of structure for the 'gimmick' to become more important than the story. BiJanus has show his skill in using the 'gimmick', in this case letters to the sister, to push the story forward. As a result we get a story that is told in two different timeframes at the same time. To do this successfully takes great skill. BiJanus has that skill and had done it successfully.

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Not sure I've ever read a story that so brilliantly captures the realities of military life, particularly in combat situations, and the impact on personal, professional, and family life. Your NCO's comment at the end says it all. Thank you, and Semper Fi.

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