FreeThinker Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 Paul and Paco have given us a cute story for Christmas in Codey's World, a moving story about two brothers far from their native land, the nightmares of one, and the desire of the other to help his little brother. Its a good effort from budding writers who are developing their talent and showing promise. I recommend it. Let them know what you think about it! http://www.codeyswor...lest-angel.html Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 When a writer attemps something like this, at the age of 15, I can only bow my head in respect. I can't imagine even trying something like this at that age. And he manages to pull it off! What a remarkable effort. C Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 Well done guys. I think that short stories are special. To write a good one, you have to make every word count. Unlike a novel, you can't dither around for a few chapters before you get to the point. This story does a good job in the respect. Nothing is wasted. Link to comment
Merkin Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 This is a powerful story from Paul and Paco. All the details ring true. The love between two brothers overcomes the stiff formality of this family and leads to an amazing outcome. It is written from the heart. I hope we will see more from these two writers. James Link to comment
Lugnutz Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 I can't add anything more that hasn't already been said. Well done. They do have shorts in the Flash section. Link to comment
Paco Posted December 15, 2012 Report Share Posted December 15, 2012 Hey guys... I wish I could take half the credit for "The Littlest Angel", but I'm not a writer. At least not like my partner Paul, who deserves all the good words you have bestowed on us. Paul says I am his muse... and that is good enough for me! Link to comment
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