Bruin Fisher Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 My Diary This story is great fun - fly-on-the-wall observational, with a twist! Another beautifully written tale from Cole Parker, living up to his reputation for diverse writing! Link to comment
Tanuki Racoon Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 Quite a good story. Link to comment
Merkin Posted May 18, 2009 Report Share Posted May 18, 2009 The characterization is a little fishy. James Merkin Link to comment
JamesSavik Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 The fish was delicious. Link to comment
Bruin Fisher Posted May 19, 2009 Author Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Quite a good story. Wow. Wibby must be really impressed! Such fulsome praise! Link to comment
colinian Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 The characterization is a little fishy.James Merkin Oh, James! That is so bad! I love it!! Colin Link to comment
Paul Schroder Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Way to go, Cole. Another fun read. Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted May 19, 2009 Report Share Posted May 19, 2009 Thanks, everyone. The story was designed to be read twice. More fun that way. Cole Link to comment
Wildone Posted May 22, 2009 Report Share Posted May 22, 2009 Another great story Cole, thanks for sharing I have to admit, when I thought of a kid letting his six year old brother watch him do all these things while he just sat there watching, I began to wonder what you were smoking I guess I'm a little slow, until the escape scene I didn't clue in. I do have to thank you though, I never knew why snails have those little antennae Link to comment
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