Bad Boy Gone Good - By Colin Kelly

[Lugnutz]

This is a nice change. Didn't know Colin knew about the seedier side of things. This is ongoing.

http://www.codeysworld.com/colinian/bad-boy-gone-good/bad-boy-gone-good.php

[JamesSavik]

OK, I'm there.

[Graeme]

An intriguing start. I'm interesting in where it goes next

[Rutabaga]

Ditto to what Graeme said.

R

[JamesSavik]

[Nigel Gordon]

This is an interesting start and I look forward to seeing where it is going to go.

[JamesSavik]

Chapter 5-

I'm glad Greg read his parents right and they are supportive of Jay.

I am really glad to see Greg's parents put their foot down- NO DRUGS!

You might be surprised how many will look the other way when it's just pot.

[Merkin]

Congratos on a fine story, Colin. "Bad Boy Gone Good" has been an edge-of-the-seater throughout. I've been fascinated to learn how much police procedure can slow investigations down rather than speed them up.

Plus I have to say you've found a way to make the story truly memorable. Readers will be able to think of it fondly as Colin's 'bullshit' story.

James

[Cole Parker]

I loved this one and will say, from my own perspective, I see the writing as an evolution of Colin's craft. Another giant step forward. Well, done, sir. Well done.

C

[Rutabaga]

Congratulations on a fine finish to a fine story.

R