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Bad Boy Gone Good - By Colin Kelly

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An intriguing start. I'm interesting in where it goes next :smile:

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This is an interesting start and I look forward to seeing where it is going to go.

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Chapter 5-

I'm glad Greg read his parents right and they are supportive of Jay.

I am really glad to see Greg's parents put their foot down- NO DRUGS!

You might be surprised how many will look the other way when it's just pot.

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Congratos on a fine story, Colin. "Bad Boy Gone Good" has been an edge-of-the-seater throughout. I've been fascinated to learn how much police procedure can slow investigations down rather than speed them up.

Plus I have to say you've found a way to make the story truly memorable. Readers will be able to think of it fondly as Colin's 'bullshit' story.

James

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