Love is Blind by Bruin Fisher

[Graeme]

Oh, wow! I certainly didn't see that coming.

Timothy just doesn't understand....

[Chris James]

Oh my...whoa! A sensational love story, a great ending...thank you, Bruin. Well worth seeing...um, reading.

[Pedro]

This story is not a joke but it has a punch line. When I read it I felt as though I had been kicked in the guts.

Congratulations Bruin. I won't say thanks because the ending has haunted me all day.

[Cole Parker]

Me too!

C

[colinian]

I didn't see the ending coming. A very powerful story.

Colin

[Gee Whillickers]

Ow, that was a major kick in the gut. So very well done, thanks for that, Bruin.

[Merkin]

Wow. So unexpected. I can't stop brooding about this one.

[Rutabaga]

It hit me right between the eyes. That was my reaction before I realized what i had just said. Wow.

R

[Bruin Fisher]

Thanks everyone for your very kind comments. The story clearly had the desired effect.

I almost feel that I should apologise for writing it; it makes for uncomfortable reading. Personally I like to read a story with a happy ending and this one... doesn't... and instead leaves you with a bad taste in the mouth. But that's what it's supposed to do and your responses tell me it worked.

Nevertheless I doubt I'll write another story that punches you in the gut like this one does!