Thanks everyone. A few years ago, I was dared into writing having never written anything before, ever. Chapter 1 of Mech 101 is my first ever effort at writing. The three prequel chapters were writtin after the initial 10 chapters of 101 were done, I felt my guys needed to tell their story from before they met.
The story picks up technical wise in the next couple prequel chapters, and some in the regular story. I don't get too into the mechanics of things, but what is there is explained. The initial 10 chapters are being re-written as we speak to flow with the current chapters. Then, there is book 2 which I'm 4 chapters into. So, there is alot to post along with trying to write the current stuff.
Let me know what you think of the story, feedback is writing fuel. Flames will be laughed at and posted.