Merkin Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Best Buds by Merkin Artie actually noticed the car before Jesse did. "Who's that?" he asked as he braked his bike at the end of Jesse's driveway. Jesse spotted familiar New Hampshire plates on the brand new Audi. "That's my Uncle Fred! My favorite uncle has new wheels! Sweet." He brought his bike to a halt beside Artie's and swung his leg over. "Unh, isn't he your only uncle? How can he be your favorite?" Artie was maddeningly logical sometimes. "Cork it, Artie. I think I need to go in now." "Can I come in and say hello? Maybe he'll give us a ride." "I'd better check things out first," said Jesse. "I thought we were best buds. I like your uncle Fred, too, you know." "We are best buds, Artie. And I know he likes you. But Uncle Fred never just shows up like this. I should go find out what's up." "O.K.... I'll see you." Obviously disappointed, Artie rode back toward his own house. Jesse watched to make sure he was well on his way before turning to go in. The next morning Jesse met Artie at the corner where they waited for the school bus. "Well?" "Well is a deep subject, Artie." "C'mon, dufus. What was the crisis?" Jesse had made up his mind to tell Artie. "No problem. Uncle Fred brought someone home for us to meet. He's getting married." "That's great, Jesse! You're gonna have a new aunt!" "It's a guy." Jesse glanced quickly at Artie's face. "Jeez." Artie thought hard as Jesse waited. Then he looked up. "Like I said, that's great! Now you can really choose a favorite uncle!" Jesse smiled. "Thanks, Artie." ______ Link to comment
Trab Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Very nice. Didn't even see that coming. Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Flash fiction is really great, isn't it? Expecially in very capable hands. C Link to comment
colinian Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 That's great, James. I'll be smiling for a log time after reading it tonight. Colin Link to comment
Steven Keiths Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 This was a little slice of happy heaven to read. Very nice indeed. Link to comment
Bruin Fisher Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Flash fiction at its very best. Today is going to be much better for me now I've read this. Thanks, Merkin, master storyteller. Link to comment
Camy Posted January 29, 2010 Report Share Posted January 29, 2010 Just ... lovely! :) Link to comment
Merkin Posted January 30, 2010 Author Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 I am grateful for your comments. I'm glad you have enjoyed this glimpse into the lives of Jesse and Artie. You may be seeing more of them, since I'm planning to record a few more of their adventures. James Link to comment
DesDownunder Posted January 30, 2010 Report Share Posted January 30, 2010 Just managed some time in my hectic life to read Best Buds. Ah if only everyone could be like Artie and Jesse. Even though we don't know their ages, Merkin conveys in his story, the uncorrupted innocence of youth's natural acceptance. Delightful! Link to comment
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