Chris James Posted May 20, 2015 Report Share Posted May 20, 2015 What an adorable collection of characters this story presents. Well done, Pedro. There is nothing complex in the plot of this story but it delights the reader with its simplicity. I always enjoy a story based upon a single element and in this case my mind paints the image of a small rustic bridge where much of the action takes place. Pedro gives us small village life peopled with interesting characters, some of them animals. I enjoyed all that local color revealed through the language in the dialogue, but as for the action sequences I think the cows stole the scene. Now I have said enough and everyone should go read this story...and here is a convenient link: http://www.awesomedude.com/pedro/saulius/saulius.htm Quote Link to comment
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