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It has been posted. Give it a look. I got a few ideas from a friend that I'll implement in the future. Until then, I have another story to tinker with.

You can add your own too.

Drawn from life.

I've got a short D.F.L. story I'm thinking of posting. If you would like to give this a look, PM me your addy and I'll send it off. It's a autobiography that is a bit raw, but it might work in this case. It's also a relatively small chapter too. I'm not sure if it needs any filler or expanding or could be left as is. Gracias!

Birthday party? Do I have to wear my speedo again? Is there a buffet? Inquiry minds want to know.............

Sounds most excellent with the story! Bummer about the job situation, things are tight on the east end too. Things will be nice sooner than you expect it. Stay cool!

Deweywriter just crested the million hits mark for the story site. I remember when it was a small site with just his work there, now look at it. Glad to be a part of it.

We'll find out what's going on soon enough. Me thinks there are a couple chapters left in this section.

Probably looking for new story goodies. I can see this being working in someplace...........

BWAHAHAHA!!!

Alot of things in book one make alot of sense now that I've read what's currently up. Been going over the whole story again (For the umteenth time) and am finding alot of things that made you scratch your head before make sense now. What happened before the stasis and alot of little things that add up to more answers to things you were questioning before. Like the book about the "Screen". Jamie actually wrote it along with putting all the info in his medallion. Things like that and people. Excellent job!!

Bakers chocolate?

You may never get a million writing lyrics, but you'll get a million attaboy's for what you do write.

The band is "The Killers". I have no idea to what their thinking but the tune is good. I'm 43 too, lets do a old people dance. Groan............. I do rock and variations of it. Really hard and abusive to mellow stuff.

My bad. Just noticed there is a thread up already for this.

A great story about preserverance and doing the right thing even though you have been done wrong. My hat is off to you Cole.

Words to live by. If I can wake up and still suck air, then everything else is secondary.

Great mini. It's almost begging for a full story, but I'm afraid it would water down what is already written. I really like this.

*Dances*

Take my hand, we'll tip toe thru the tulips. OK, not really. Take my hand tho, I just scrached my arse and need a second opinion on something.

I'll bet that took time to voice. I tried listening to it, but it didn't feel right. Read it long enough with the voices in my head that it's set in its way. That's just me tho. Thanks for the effort. It looks like the story is picking up speed. Gonna be a rough ride.

Sounds like fun. Who wants to go wheeling? I can has Wibby as co-pilot?

It's not supposed to make sense. He's trying to drag you down to his level, then he'll beat you with experience.