Rutabaga Posted June 12, 2021 Author Report Share Posted June 12, 2021 John Jacob Jingleheimer Schmidt— boy does that take me back R Link to comment
Oliver Posted June 12, 2021 Report Share Posted June 12, 2021 I like how this is developing, together with David himself. Hate the cliff hangers though. 😉 Well done again, Cole. For me, you always find the right pace, not too fast, not too slow. I like the flow, the development. Ok, I admit, the cliff hangers too. 🙂 Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted June 16, 2021 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2021 David says his attention is caught by tomboyish girls. Does that mean that @Gee Whillickers was on the right track when he wondered aloud whether Nicki would reappear? R [Afterthought -- I suspect we can all see where this is going, but I'm waiting to be surprised.] Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted June 19, 2021 Author Report Share Posted June 19, 2021 I needed to stop thinking about Jessica. Ya think? R Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted June 23, 2021 Author Report Share Posted June 23, 2021 And now we switch to the POV of Jordan's father. R Link to comment
Ivor Slipper Posted June 23, 2021 Report Share Posted June 23, 2021 56 minutes ago, Rutabaga said: And now we switch to the POV of Jordan's father. R Confused my simple mind for a minute that did.🙂 Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted June 26, 2021 Author Report Share Posted June 26, 2021 I could easily learn to dislike Cynthia. R Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted June 30, 2021 Author Report Share Posted June 30, 2021 Matthew (Jordan’s dad) seems like a nice guy, and it’s good that he appears to be landing on his feet. Don (David’s dad) also seems like a nice guy. It’s weird that they have connected because of David’s friend Mike. R Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 1, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 1, 2021 So could this be Jordan? Note, by the way, that we had Part 1 with David's POV, then Part 2 with Jordan's dad's POV. Does that mean Part 3 will be Jordan's POV . . . or something else? R Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted July 2, 2021 Report Share Posted July 2, 2021 Questions, questions, questions. The answer? Patience, patience, patience. C Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 2, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 2, 2021 Here is one possibility for Cynthia: R Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 3, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 3, 2021 As Cole said, questions, questions, questions. Asked by David. Now we know where he gets this from. 🙂 R Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 5, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 5, 2021 I wonder if this could be Mike: R Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 8, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 8, 2021 Both Mike and David's parents seem to be OK with David's news. But how will younger brother Jeff react? R Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 10, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 10, 2021 This chapter's Kleenex moment, from Jeff: "I have a lot of friends who have older brothers. You’re so much nicer that any of them. I’m so lucky you‘re like you are." Let's hope the video idea works. R Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 14, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2021 Sorry, Dad. As if Dad really expected his “once a week” guideline to stick. Sheesh. R Link to comment
Oliver Posted July 14, 2021 Report Share Posted July 14, 2021 Nothing wrong with a good meal of romance 🙂 Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 17, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2021 Continuing my series, we do not get any real information about the appearance of Bax (Brian Baxter) but here is one possibility that occurred to me: Seems like both David and Jordan have come out of these events with stronger and more self-assured personalities. And kudos to Jeff for being a loyal defender of his friends. David could well be right that Jeff will outshine him as he grows up, but there's little question of Jeff's loyalty and affection. Good show. Link to comment
Oliver Posted July 18, 2021 Report Share Posted July 18, 2021 On 7/17/2021 at 5:40 AM, Rutabaga said: Good show. O Yes, it was. :-) Link to comment
Cole Parker Posted July 18, 2021 Report Share Posted July 18, 2021 Thanks! Always helps, hearing that. C Link to comment
Rutabaga Posted July 19, 2021 Author Report Share Posted July 19, 2021 I decided it wasn't fair not to include a speculation photo of Jeff; R Link to comment
Camy Posted July 19, 2021 Report Share Posted July 19, 2021 Ha! It's finished - or, in old English, fin-i-shed (utilise your best Chaucerian accent). This is peachy, as I can now read from start to finish and not get miffed at cliffhangers. 'tis going to be a good week! Link to comment
Camy Posted July 21, 2021 Report Share Posted July 21, 2021 I am somewhat miffed that Cole knows more about soccer than I do. How can this be? 🤔 Link to comment
Merkin Posted July 21, 2021 Report Share Posted July 21, 2021 As we all know, "Cole Parker" is actually a pseudonym for a ten-man writing team, and one of them is Robbie Rogers. Link to comment
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